Reviewer: CakeorDeath
Date: 06/24/08 8:42
Chapter: When They Met...

How come you've only got one review? I love this fic so much. Hagrid is a great character and there isn't enough fics about him. I loved this story. Well done. Update ASAP

Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 10/06/07 11:59
Chapter: When They Met...

I hope you don't mind me putting this one my favorites list, because that's where it's going to reside forever. The vivid verbs and adjectives you used really painted a picture in my mind. I loved when you described the Great Hall.


When Professor Flitwick called, “O’Reily, Jacqueline!” Hagrid waited with bated breath. He liked Jackie, and it would be good to have someone he already knew in his own House.

Jackie, looking flushed, sat down and put on the hat. After about thirty seconds or so, the hat opened its rip and declared, “GRYFFINDOR!”

That was one of my favorite parts. You are such a great author, I am going to see what else you've written. PLEASE CONTINUE!

I can't find very many thing to nitpick, surprisingly. I admit, I wasn't very excited when I saw the summary, but decided to read anyways. I'm find it hard to believe that no one besides me has reviewed.

*Claire*

Author's Response: aw, thank you very much! I think you've just made my day. I'm not the greatest with summaries, but maybe I should try and think another one up.

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