Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 09/03/07 15:24
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

ha ha, Lily's losing her nerve!!! Ha ha, James will have her soon!! Hopefully... Except then the story will be over... :( Even so, please update sooon! The suspense is killing me! Even tho it wasn't a cliffy...

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 09/03/07 12:16
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

I liek this chapter, especially the alter egos part. I'm sorry I can't leave a longer review, I'm already behind on an essay, but your story was definitely worth giving up 10 minutes of time I should have been using to research. Oh well, update soon!

Reviewer: Lilys Passion
Date: 09/03/07 12:08
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

Ooooooo!!!!! Lily and James are smelling eachother!!!!!! This is the start of a romance...

~Lilys Passion

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 09/03/07 11:39
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

wonderful. please update soon and make the chapters longer!

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 09/03/07 8:57
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

Aww. Short but nice :]

Reviewer: Pheonix Fire Opal
Date: 08/13/07 20:31
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Is there going to be a next chapter? If there is I cain't wait! Please E-mail me when you update it at scarlet_macaw44444@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm! There is, in fact, a more convenient way to know when this story is updated. By clicking 'Account Info' and then 'Edit Personal Info' there is a box you can check. By checking this box you will get an e-mail every time I update this story, since you have favorited it.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 08/06/07 16:39
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Haha, I like it! Very funny. I like the reappearnce of teh bird trick. Great job, update soon!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/06/07 4:26
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Heehee. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lollypop49
Date: 08/05/07 21:39
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

great chapter!!! i cant wait for the next one =)

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 08/05/07 20:50
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Oooh! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: fetherblaka
Date: 08/05/07 20:11
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

good- but i wanna know more! what happens next?!

Reviewer: lunarocks15
Date: 08/04/07 18:49
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

omg thats so funny i totally love it! i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!! :)

Reviewer: Emma Radcliffe
Date: 08/04/07 18:46
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Nice! I like it!

Reviewer: Mela
Date: 08/04/07 18:22
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Please continue, you're off to a very good start. Nice job!

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 08/04/07 10:47
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Oh this is great, I can't wait for the rest of the story! And I love the title too, I saw it and just knew I had to read it. :]

But just one thing, if they're in their seventh year wouldn't that make them seventeen and not sixteen?

Author's Response: I noticed my mistake once I sent in this story for submission; I don't think I can change it now, though. But thanks for pointing that out! :)

Author's Response: I found out that indeed, I can change it. Curse being a newbie to this. :P It's been edited now.

Reviewer: xoxsammixox
Date: 08/04/07 10:42
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

i like it so far! this is a good start and i can't wait for more chapters!

Reviewer: liliy16
Date: 08/04/07 9:57
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

i like it so far. i like how you made lily's character- she doesn't over react to things like she does in most stories.
can't wait till the next chapter comes up!

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