ha ha, Lily's losing her nerve!!! Ha ha, James will have her soon!! Hopefully... Except then the story will be over... :( Even so, please update sooon! The suspense is killing me! Even tho it wasn't a cliffy...
I liek this chapter, especially the alter egos part. I'm sorry I can't leave a longer review, I'm already behind on an essay, but your story was definitely worth giving up 10 minutes of time I should have been using to research. Oh well, update soon!
Ooooooo!!!!! Lily and James are smelling eachother!!!!!! This is the start of a romance...
wonderful. please update soon and make the chapters longer!
Aww. Short but nice :]
Is there going to be a next chapter? If there is I cain't wait! Please E-mail me when you update it at email@example.com
Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm! There is, in fact, a more convenient way to know when this story is updated. By clicking 'Account Info' and then 'Edit Personal Info' there is a box you can check. By checking this box you will get an e-mail every time I update this story, since you have favorited it.
Haha, I like it! Very funny. I like the reappearnce of teh bird trick. Great job, update soon!
Heehee. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
great chapter!!! i cant wait for the next one =)
Oooh! Can't wait for more!
good- but i wanna know more! what happens next?!
omg thats so funny i totally love it! i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!! :)
Nice! I like it!
Please continue, you're off to a very good start. Nice job!
Oh this is great, I can't wait for the rest of the story! And I love the title too, I saw it and just knew I had to read it. :]
But just one thing, if they're in their seventh year wouldn't that make them seventeen and not sixteen?
Author's Response: I noticed my mistake once I sent in this story for submission; I don't think I can change it now, though. But thanks for pointing that out! :)
Author's Response: I found out that indeed, I can change it. Curse being a newbie to this. :P It's been edited now.
i like it so far! this is a good start and i can't wait for more chapters!
i like it so far. i like how you made lily's character- she doesn't over react to things like she does in most stories.
can't wait till the next chapter comes up!