Now, let me tell you one thing, and you better get on it,
KEEP WRITING! YOU"RE KILLIN' ME HERE!
There, now that I've said what I wanted to say, I must say, I shall stop typing utterly pointless words and go to another good story. Goodbye.
Oooh, it's turning out good!!!!!!!
you got sirius right, James is great, and i am absolutely glad you included Alice and Frank. did you know sirius is the brightest star in the constallation Canis Major, wich is a big dog?
Awww! This is really cute, please update soon!
this is so good
this is good i like it
ha this is good i belive i shall shut up and continue the story *wink*
I love your story! Continue, please!
Can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome, awesome!
great work!can't wait for the next chapter :)
Haha ooops. Is little Jamesy shy of changing in front of Lily? (the guys in my class seem to have no problem... *rolls eyes*) Haha hmm I haven't read any sappy novel yet.... this could be fun! :)
Awwww I like this story! Its really cute :) your characterization is awsome! I love how you define sirius and marlene, ther the best!this is most def going in my favs! UPDATE!!!!! :D
I generally don't read james/lily, and I haven't read your story...but your title is the best one I have seen in a long time. keep up the great puns :)
I love it!It's one of the best Lily/James fanfics I have read.Please hurry and write the next chapters
Great!I really like it!
like this so far but please don't try and make it corny i hate corny stories
This is very well written and entertaining. I can't wait to read more =]
Have to say, one of the better starts to an L/J. The break from the clicheness of this category is refreshing. And, I must agree with the others, the "you smell" line was genius. Lord, James is an awkward one.