Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 13:59
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

Now, let me tell you one thing, and you better get on it,
KEEP WRITING! YOU"RE KILLIN' ME HERE!
There, now that I've said what I wanted to say, I must say, I shall stop typing utterly pointless words and go to another good story. Goodbye.

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 13:50
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Oooh, it's turning out good!!!!!!!

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/14/08 18:02
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

you got sirius right, James is great, and i am absolutely glad you included Alice and Frank. did you know sirius is the brightest star in the constallation Canis Major, wich is a big dog?

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 12/15/07 0:56
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

Awww! This is really cute, please update soon!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 12/07/07 13:39
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

this is so good
update please

~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 12/07/07 13:33
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

this is good i like it

~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 12/07/07 13:26
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

ha this is good i belive i shall shut up and continue the story *wink*

~lola~

Reviewer: colour_queen
Date: 12/03/07 18:32
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

I love your story! Continue, please!

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 11/16/07 20:22
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

Can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome, awesome!

Reviewer: tashy
Date: 11/02/07 11:24
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

great work!can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 10/24/07 23:19
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Haha ooops. Is little Jamesy shy of changing in front of Lily? (the guys in my class seem to have no problem... *rolls eyes*) Haha hmm I haven't read any sappy novel yet.... this could be fun! :)

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 20:36
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

Awwww I like this story! Its really cute :) your characterization is awsome! I love how you define sirius and marlene, ther the best!this is most def going in my favs! UPDATE!!!!! :D

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/20/07 0:02
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

I generally don't read james/lily, and I haven't read your story...but your title is the best one I have seen in a long time. keep up the great puns :)

Reviewer: black sabathings
Date: 10/17/07 22:46
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

Nice.

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/17/07 20:23
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 3

I love it!It's one of the best Lily/James fanfics I have read.Please hurry and write the next chapters

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/17/07 20:18
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Great!I really like it!

Reviewer: silleri
Date: 09/04/07 6:07
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

like this so far but please don't try and make it corny i hate corny stories

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 09/03/07 23:33
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

This is very well written and entertaining. I can't wait to read more =]

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 09/03/07 23:29
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 1

Cute =]

Reviewer: allie_is_treble
Date: 09/03/07 21:54
Chapter: Part I, Chapter 2

Have to say, one of the better starts to an L/J. The break from the clicheness of this category is refreshing. And, I must agree with the others, the "you smell" line was genius. Lord, James is an awkward one.

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