Your writing style is wonderful! It paints a clear picture in my mind and is very sweet. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you so much! -Ema
Well done, Ema! It was a very well-written story and intrigued me right to the end. Can't wait to see more of your work soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. :) As you probably know by now (I PMed you about it) I won't be doing a lot more writting for here in the near future. But maybe I'll come back to it. Thanks for your support. rnrn-Ema
I'm a bit confused. I think I know what's happening but I'm not so sure.
It was well-written but a bit confusing. Well-done and be sure to update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I know it is a little confusing, but it's supposed to be both from Hermione's mind, and from a third person view, so it is. -Ema