I really liked it. I loved how it was in Remus' mothers POV as well, I think that was awesome. I really like your style of writing, you wrote the emotions down well, so it was easy for the reader to sympathyze. Well done, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading.
That was amazing! I loved how it was from Remus's mother's POV.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I originally had it from the father's POV, but then I read in an interview with Jo that his mother was a muggle. I just decided that having it from a non-wizarding POV would be something new for me.