so cute! i love the snippets from each year. the ending was so nice too that it doesn't even matter there was not kiss. very good!
-El
okay, confused here. did james win over lily??? i am reallly messed up right now.
I love the story! It's very good! Try writing some more stories.
It doesn't say anything about James realizing she liked him too, but I reckon that was implied and I'm too tired/idiotic to realize it.Great story ;D
Heh, looks like my reaction was the same as most everyone else's: "Awww!" :P
woah i love this it also made me cry
awww thats so sweet i love it! it was a really good idea showing different moments from each year at hogwarts not just 7th year. it really helps you get a sense of the characters. good job:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! *huggles*
Excellent story! It's so sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Aww! I almost cried, this is so sweet! Great, great job!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it so much. :)
AWW.
That was so sweet..
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)
I love how calm this is! It's quite fast-paced because it's set over so many years but it's definitely not rushed. Really sweet, well done!
Author's Response: Ok, excellent! I was worried each section was a bit rushed. I'm glad you didn't think so!
Sigh...great fic. It was just so sweet :-)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)
Awww! This really was very sweet.
I'd have to say I really enjoyed the ending the most, mainly because it was something I could definitely see happening. I can picture Lily having those emotions toward him, and the way they finally admitted the truth was very cute.
I also enjoyed the pranks that the Marauders pulled on her throughout the year. It showed they were definitely the pranksters, starting out before school even began! Again, I could see those kind of things happening.
The only thing I caught was during the scene where Lily falls asleep in History of Magic, Alice's name is misspelled. Very small. :)
This was a great one-shot. Job well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, again! <333
Yeah, I had a totally different ending before, and I thought, well, this wouldn't happen. Lily wouldn't react this way. So I changed it a bunch and I'm glad you like it now!
Yeah, it's unfortunate when the character's name is so close to actual words, so you can't automatically tell if it's misspelled. *facepalm*
Ah! Its so sweet! I love it.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks! :)
That was actually a very sweet story! I like the fact that they didn't kiss, there are lots of stories where they like, you know, kiss and make up. This was refreshingly different. Good work!
Author's Response: Response below, lol. Thanks for the double review, though. ;) Haha.
That was actually a very sweet story! I like the fact that they didn't kiss, there are lots of stories where they like, you know, kiss and make up. This was refreshingly different. Good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know exactly what you mean about them kissing and making up after. I didn't want it to be like that -- I like to think Lily has more will power (I don't want to say self-preservation, 'cause it sounds like I"m calling her something rude... but I think you know what I mean).
Thanks for reviewing! :)
just wow...
blew my mind away... i love the way james shushs lily. the corny the better. Hey! its a compliment. keep it up *wink*
Author's Response: Aww, James. <3 Lol. Thanks! :)
That was so sweet! I love James/Lily fics. Great job!
Author's Response: Me too! Lol. Thanks! :)
Awwww that's a cute story! :]
Love it :]
xx
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)
