I really like this poem! I think that if Peter had any regret, this might be something he would think (I don't think that he would write it, he isn't THAT brave)
Great fic, post more soon,
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the lovely review! :-) For his sake, I hope he did think along those lines. And yeah, he doesn't strike me as a poetry-writing type either! ~Nez
I came across this poem as I looked for something to read, and was astounded by the deph of feeling it contains.
It really gives us a view into Peter... And to tell you the truth, after reading your poem it makes me feel sorry for the sod, lol. Excellent writing, keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I do think he regrets what he did, and he deserves some pity. Thanks again =)
I felt really sorry for Peter when reading this! Good job for a beginner! You should continue writing poetry! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: A review! Thanks! Really glad you liked it, means a lot =)