Reviews For Goodbye
Reviewer: Nadia Malfoy
Date: 07/31/07 13:03
Chapter: Goodbye

I like it! I don't usually go for poetry, but this was really good. Very short,though--I think you could have made it a bit longer.

Author's Response: Thank you! Again...Rave<3

Reviewer: Nadia Malfoy
Date: 07/31/07 13:03
Chapter: Goodbye

I like it! I don't usually go for poetry, but this was really good. Very short,though--I think you could have made it a bit longer.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and maybe now, you can start reading more poetry! Miight even start writing. And I don't think it's too short. But if I made it longer, it would have felt sort of forced. Rave<3

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 07/29/07 19:19
Chapter: Goodbye

Oh my, was this amazing or what? I absolutely love it! It captures so much emotion, it is brilliant. It has a great rhyme scheme and rhythem, it's just so good. Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Oh, wow! Such great compliments! Thank you! So, so very much! Thank you. Rave<3

Reviewer: Stallion
Date: 07/28/07 7:04
Chapter: Goodbye

Try singing that with passion! You can feel the grief! Amazing! That's all I can say....... :(

Author's Response: Wow, I"m glad you feel so strongly about this. I wrote this in memory of my sister. I think she would've liked it. Thank you! Rave<3

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 07/26/07 17:23
Chapter: Goodbye

Awww... Harry died? So sad. My only question... why did you italicize (hope I spelled that right...) the "bye" in the... what is it... 9th stanza? Was it to emphasize his leaving?

Anyways, great poem- like I said, very sad. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yes, Harry died...boo. And about the 'bye' thing, I don't really know why I did it. I guess I thought it looked cool :P. But your reason sounds a lot more sophisticated, so I'll go with that ;). Thank you! Glad you like it. Rave <3

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 07/26/07 5:14
Chapter: Goodbye

very good perhaphs you should think on making it a fic and not just a poem. i still liked it though

Author's Response: I don't think a fic would have captured the depth of it like a poem. And I am very glad that you like it! Rave<3

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Green Knight Rises by Kerichi 6th-7th Years
In Creevey Wizard Comics, the Green Knight aids those in need under the cloak...
Friends and Foes by Northumbrian 3rd-5th Years
It took Harry and his friends years to discover who killed Colin Creevey. Ginny...
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum Professors
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
FEATURED
Wild Card by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
It was going to happen eventually: Oliver Wood had to retire. But when the decision...
Half-life by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Neville has the rest of his life ahead of him, but all he can do is look back...
Skinny Love by xxbabewithbrainsxx 6th-7th Years
“I’ve always been chubby. Admit it.” “You’ve never been skinny...
Tigerlily by Maple_and_PheonixFeather 3rd-5th Years
You promised yourself you'd never hurt her, but there are times when you wonder...
Astriferous by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Merope Gaunt has never been celestial.Nominated for a 2014 QSQ - Best Dark/Angst. Nominated...
CATEGORIES