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Name: Nadia Malfoy (Signed) · Date: 07/31/07 13:03 · For: Goodbye
I like it! I don't usually go for poetry, but this was really good. Very short,though--I think you could have made it a bit longer.

Author's Response: Thank you! Again...Rave<3


Name: Nadia Malfoy (Signed) · Date: 07/31/07 13:03 · For: Goodbye
I like it! I don't usually go for poetry, but this was really good. Very short,though--I think you could have made it a bit longer.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and maybe now, you can start reading more poetry! Miight even start writing. And I don't think it's too short. But if I made it longer, it would have felt sort of forced. Rave<3


Name: MagicalMaddie331 (Signed) · Date: 07/29/07 19:19 · For: Goodbye
Oh my, was this amazing or what? I absolutely love it! It captures so much emotion, it is brilliant. It has a great rhyme scheme and rhythem, it's just so good. Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Oh, wow! Such great compliments! Thank you! So, so very much! Thank you. Rave<3


Name: Stallion (Signed) · Date: 07/28/07 7:04 · For: Goodbye
Try singing that with passion! You can feel the grief! Amazing! That's all I can say....... :(

Author's Response: Wow, I"m glad you feel so strongly about this. I wrote this in memory of my sister. I think she would've liked it. Thank you! Rave<3


Name: Lalalalatina (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 17:23 · For: Goodbye
Awww... Harry died? So sad. My only question... why did you italicize (hope I spelled that right...) the "bye" in the... what is it... 9th stanza? Was it to emphasize his leaving?

Anyways, great poem- like I said, very sad. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yes, Harry died...boo. And about the 'bye' thing, I don't really know why I did it. I guess I thought it looked cool :P. But your reason sounds a lot more sophisticated, so I'll go with that ;). Thank you! Glad you like it. Rave <3


Name: baby b (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 5:14 · For: Goodbye
very good perhaphs you should think on making it a fic and not just a poem. i still liked it though

Author's Response: I don't think a fic would have captured the depth of it like a poem. And I am very glad that you like it! Rave<3


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