Reviews For Miss Myrtle
Reviewer: parakeetsrox
Date: 06/06/08 11:52
Chapter: Spying

lololololololol

Author's Response: Ditto previous response.

Reviewer: parakeetsrox
Date: 06/06/08 11:52
Chapter: Spying

lololololololol

Author's Response: Why, thank you.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 09/18/07 14:47
Chapter: Spying

Lol, this is too funny!!! I'm so glad I challenged you to write this...was it me, I can't remember?...well, anyway, you write very well! Didn't mean to sound surprised there, lol. I loved this, it was light hearted, natural and funny. Well done, jolly good job! ;-)
Mia

Author's Response: Gah, that was so long ago! But yes, I do believe that you were the one who challenged me. Fun times...

Anyways, I'm glad you ended up enjoying it. Thanks for leaving me a lovely review! They really make my day (especially today). :D Thanks again!!

Reviewer: lioness_of_magic
Date: 08/29/07 16:27
Chapter: Spying

that's so hiliarious i almost fell out of my chair!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Uh oh! I don't want my readers to be injured! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. Yay!

Reviewer: Solemn Kedavra
Date: 08/24/07 14:42
Chapter: Spying

Like it. Came back to read it a second time. This is the first MNFF story I read.

Author's Response: Wow! I'm honored that you read my story first! And then read it a second time! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you so much for leaving me such a kind review. :D

Reviewer: lovelylily713
Date: 08/22/07 18:54
Chapter: Spying

awesome! i love myrtle, in fact i'm listning to the moaning myrtles right now.

Author's Response: I'm glad you were able to read about one of your favorite characters! There aren't too many fics out there that are about her or written from her perspective. Hehe, I'm unique! :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsmalfoy7
Date: 08/22/07 12:17
Chapter: Spying

awwww
haha
wat an unusual pairing
altho they weren't together
but u no wat i mean
haha
luv it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your very generous words of praise!

Reviewer: twirlergirl583
Date: 08/20/07 16:37
Chapter: Spying

lol...great story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! My day is suddenly brighter. :D

Reviewer: luna_longbottom88
Date: 08/18/07 22:44
Chapter: Spying

Lol. You make me smile! This was a highly origional fic, great job! I never thought about it, but i guess that mytrle would like to look at other fine looking males ;)

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I strive to be original, and I'm glad I pulled that off. Thanks for the review! Keep smilin' ! :D

Reviewer: padfoot_girl
Date: 08/16/07 16:21
Chapter: Spying

That was cute! More like a romance than a humor fic to me. But eh. You know what I got from this story? I think you have a little crush on Mr. Black. ;) lol. I bet you do. Well I do too, so *virtual high five* for that

Author's Response: I'm afraid that I've got it bad for Sirius' buddy, Remus. But this means we can be friends, lol, since we're not fighting over the same guy. :D Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: TheBlackSister
Date: 08/15/07 18:34
Chapter: Spying

Short and sweet, what can I say? Brilliant! I've always wondered if Myrtle ever graced anyone but Harry and Cedric with her presence in their bath time. Thank you so much, this is really good and original!

Author's Response: Aw, shucks! Thanks for a great review. *smiles hugely*. I've always thought that Myrtle tended to have habits. So, if she spied on Cedric and Harry, why shouldn't she spy on Sirius? :D

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 08/13/07 8:45
Chapter: Spying

very well written, and fun to read :] myrtle is hilarious.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it was at least half as much fun for you to read it as it was for me to write it!

Reviewer: a_little_magic
Date: 08/09/07 14:38
Chapter: Spying

cute. very reminiscent of the harry/myrtle scene in GoF, but still good.

Author's Response: Yup. This is simply a generation earlier. And personally, I would have gone for Sirius:D

Author's Response: Edit: I could tell...

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 08/08/07 14:34
Chapter: Spying

hehe. I don't think it was too hilarious, just kinda sweet and naughty on Myrtle's part. The ending made me smile devilishly.

8/10


Author's Response: Sugar and spice and everything nice - that's what little girls are made of. Hehe. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 08/05/07 14:04
Chapter: Spying

This was a welcome relief from all the Dark/angsty stories I've been reading. Thank you! I loved it, it was so funny!
Katie

Author's Response: Sugary sweet with humor on top! That's they way I like it....:D

Reviewer: Loony Libby
Date: 08/03/07 11:21
Chapter: Spying

I love this story, It is so funny. 10 stars.

Author's Response: Aww...Thank you!! Your kind words brighten my day!

Reviewer: Seriously Sirius
Date: 08/02/07 11:06
Chapter: Spying

Hmm...Deja Vu...maybe just MAYBE I've seen that plot before!

Author's Response: Are you Sirius? Lol. Yeah, Jo has always been a fantastic source of inspiration. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Marauder by Midnight
Date: 08/01/07 8:44
Chapter: Spying

Sirius and Myrtle would make an interesting pairing, I think. Your portrayal of Myrtle as a lovesick ghost was funny. I had always thought that her behaviour was only teasing; she never seemed to warm up to Harry even after the prefect bathroom scene in GoF. But I can see her infatuated with Sirius Black (since so many other OCs AND real-life people are).

I loved the details you had put in the story, such as the thinning bubbles and Sirius' choice of bubbles (or lack thereof) in the past. They really made the story funnier and Myrtle's reaction more amusing.

The only thing I thought was odd was Sirius' reaction to Myrtle being there after she left. He seemed more put out about his evening being interrupted than the fact that he'd been seen naked so many times by a perverted ghost.

t was uncanny how she did that. Was she following him?

I wanted to see where this train of thought led him. What might he have thought would be the best way to shake her off his tail? What did he make of this admirer?

Author's Response: And, thanks again! :D

Reviewer: Marauder by Midnight
Date: 08/01/07 8:43
Chapter: Spying

Sirius and Myrtle would make an interesting pairing, I think. Your portrayal of Myrtle as a lovesick ghost was funny. I had always thought that her behaviour was only teasing; she never seemed to warm up to Harry even after the prefect bathroom scene in GoF. But I can see her infatuated with Sirius Black (since so many other OCs AND real-life people are).

I loved the details you had put in the story, such as the thinning bubbles and Sirius' choice of bubbles (or lack thereof) in the past. They really made the story funnier and Myrtle's reaction more amusing.

The only thing I thought was odd was Sirius' reaction to Myrtle being there after she left. He seemed more put out about his evening being interrupted than the fact that he'd been seen naked so many times by a perverted ghost.

t was uncanny how she did that. Was she following him?

I wanted to see where this train of thought led him. What might he have thought would be the best way to shake her off his tail? What did he make of this admirer?

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! And, as for Myrtle's spying record, she didn't only spy on him in the bathroom - she ended up in his dormitory several times and he once caught her staring at him from the rack of toast at breakfast. :D

Perhaps I should go back and do a little rewriting to include what he actually thought. *thinks about interesting ideas to have Sirius think*. You have given me much food for the thought. Thank you!

Reviewer: thetriorocks
Date: 07/31/07 8:42
Chapter: Spying

that was rather disturbing

Author's Response: Yes Stalker!Myrtle is rather creepy. But, a girl can dream, can't she? And Myrtle only goes for the best! ;)

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