Reviews For Loving her laugh
Reviewer: BowTruckle_Hugs
Date: 10/06/11 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this. Some of the dialogue for Ron and Hermione didn't feel like dialogue, otherwise I really loved it.

Reviewer: pink5678
Date: 03/20/11 6:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

aw lol i loved this fic was amazing :P

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/06/09 22:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwwz sooo sweet!

Reviewer: HPbeauty
Date: 11/02/08 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

Luuuuuved it! So cute! Nicely written! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/06/07 3:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

aaaw this is lovely, just beautiful... i love it

Reviewer: alisza
Date: 11/16/07 20:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

THat was brilliant! I loved it !

Reviewer: unique_normality
Date: 09/15/07 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

wOOt

Reviewer: GinnyPotterthe7th
Date: 08/31/07 5:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwwww

Reviewer: LifeisGood
Date: 08/13/07 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant! Love the fluff!

Reviewer: luna_longbottom88
Date: 08/12/07 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

very sweet, nicely done!

Reviewer: Lozzie28
Date: 08/02/07 4:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

i loved it
really fantastic especially for a first fanfic

Reviewer: hermionelover87
Date: 07/27/07 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww!!!!!!!!!!1 that was really cute!!!! great story!!!=D

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 07/26/07 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww...that was cute!

Reviewer: Ronsgrl95
Date: 07/25/07 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my gosh...how sweet! i really loved it!

Reviewer: leo_granger
Date: 07/22/07 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

somewhat predictable, but good writing!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 07/22/07 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

hehe...
I really enjoyed that, Ron was really in character and it was really sweet! I can just see ron letting that slip. Ron and hermione are the best couple and this was a brilliant one-shot for them. Well done!

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 07/22/07 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was a really good first-time fic. It takes a lot of talent to be able to write decent romance for the first time.

“That’s behind us now. Lets enjoy the moment Hermione and look to the future, that’s all we can really control.”

I thought that this was a bit OOC for Ron to say. It sounded too wise... to Hermione like. And also a little cheesy. :o

Also, there should be comma's surronding the name Hermione. :)

I also had a minor problem with the kiss - I know a lot of fics have these sweet, tender kiss including, admittidly, one of my own, but first kisses are usually quite awkward and clumsy affairs, and if you add something like them both tilting their heads the same way, it can make it a bit more realistic.

Anyways, it was really good for a first fic, let alone for a first romance, I was really quite impressed. :)

~Evie

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 07/22/07 13:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, how sweet!

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