Wow I can see u put some hard work into it!!! I am not a really good reviewer but I can tell that u got some talent! Excellent poem!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry for taking long, it's been quite a while since anyone's reviewed this.
Hehe. I liked this one a lot. It was fun to read. Thanks for reviewing my poem, otherwise I wouldn't have found yours! :) By the way, reading your profile, I didn't use to like Tonks/Remus either. But now I do! Omg. xD But anyhoo, great poem. Keep at it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! You write amazing poems by the way!
Now that it what I call really good advertising. I can just see it on the twin's promotional flyers.=Sumayya
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks for reviewing!
WOW. I've seen(and written) better but boy this is good!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
This poem made me laugh! Great job with the rhyming. I think you got every one of their products into this poem. Good job!
Author's Response: Actually, there were a few products I left out like the Patented Daydream Charm, Fever Fudge, and Puking Pastilles. But oh well. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
A creature in shades of colorful fluff
That line is missing punctuation. Just thought I'd point that out.
Anyways, (again) great job on this poem! It was very enjoyabale and a lot different. I can just see Fred and George playing or even singing this in their shop. Hahaha. It'd be a nice way to advertise. Excellent job.Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!