Good, good, good. *rushes ahead to next chapter* *calls back* perfect 10!!!
Ah! I can't wait to see how Severus reacts when he wakes up. 10
Oooo. Now what is Osiris up to? Eavesdropper.....10!
Hey! WOW i'm so sry i havent reviewed in ages but it's just that i havent been here on mugglenet.ff reading in ages! but i'm glad i cane back! wow that ending was GREAT!! I mean its sad that u stopped writing cuz ure stories are really good but i'm so happy becuase this story had a great ending!! anywho i loved this story and the prequal and if u ever decide to write a sequal to this or w/e i'll keep reading! kk loved it and good job!! laterz
OMG, It was so beautiful! I love it! Although I do think that you should write a fic about those 13 years that you skipped over, because that would be awesome. :)
i love this fic its great the ending was realy good this is one of the best fic ive read in a long time two thumbs up!!!!!! :) it would be great if you would do some ficlets w/ the characters in them 1 suggestion though, would you talk about remous and tonks wedding and lives!!!!!! pretty please!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you have enjoyed my writing. I do plan on some future ficlets. I'm currently posting on The Petulant Poetress as well and will also post any future work there. Whatever I do I will certainly include Remus and probably Tonks.
Oh I'm so sad, but so happy! But so sad but so happy but so sad...WAAAHHHH :'( IT"S OVER *sniffs* But it was such a fantastical story, or stories I should say. Oh I think I'm gonna cry... *gives you giant hug* Thank you *sniff* SOO much for the wonderful-fantastic-excellent- fluffy-angst-emotional-fics. You get a *infinite sign* (8 flipped sideways). ... WAHHHHH!!!! :')
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you have enjoyed this series. I appreciate your wonderful words.
Haven't read the story yet, and judging from the rest of the reviews, it's quiet good, but OMG! I didn't even think of Hermione.... and SNAPE????!!! Snape was in school w/ James! That means he's probably around 40 or 50 which means Hermione would be 31 and he'd be in his 60's and 70's! Come on now girls, we can do better than this! -ha not talking about the story, cuz again, i can't judge w/o reading it. (( speaking of reading it... ))
Oh, Bravo! The story made me laugh, and cry, and well you get the picture. I especially like your closing line! Can we expect any more about Grandchildren? I'm dying to see what else you can come up with *100000000000000*
Author's Response: I'm glad this brought on so many different emotions, because that's what I was going for. I don't know if I'll be doing anything on the grandkids, but I would like to every now and then re-visit the story perhaps in flashbacks. I do have a new story in the queue, so hopefully that will be up soon.
I can't beleive that it is finally over. i am so happy that you finished it. But at the same time, I am sad that it is over. But I know, you couldn't keep this story going forever. Interest would have faded quickly. I love your works. They are amazing. It has been a pleasure reading all of you works. And I look forward to reading all of your future works. It's people like you, who inspire me to keep trying. (10+++).... lol...bye....
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this. I agree with you. Had I continued then it just would not have been the same. I told the story I set out to tell in this particular story and it needed to end. I myself sometimes read stories which I feel should have ended far sooner. It just seemed like a good time to end this. I thank you for your encouraging words and I wish you luck in your work as well. Keep trying and don't allow others to make you feel like you are not worthy of expressing your creativity.
hey, i think some ppl need to lighten up about the way severus and hermione act, because they expect them to be the same even when totally different things happen! How can a person not change when they experience something like what he and hermione have? thats my two cents worth anyway. i agree with the fact that harry needed someone new, with most matches already played out to full!
Author's Response: Yes, I got an incredible amount of flack in the chapter of this story when Hermione stayed behind and didn't go to save Severus. People said that Hermione would have gone. Well my belief is that no, she would not, at least not at this stage in her life. Many people forgot that while her husband and son were being held by Bella, she still had a young daughter. So was she to risk her life and risk dying? So then possibly she would have had a daughter with no mother and possibly no father or brother. I believe she would have stayed behind. There were three grown wizards going to help Severus, and one of them a former Death Eater. I really didn't see the point in including her. Its crazy to believe they would both be the same exact people they are now in the stories. Even Hermione has changed throughout the books we have read.
hey, ive read all of your stories in this series over the last few days, and i take it that yo just recently finished this story. I've posted messages in some spots after certain chapters where i just had to say something. I thought this story was really great, and i love how you changed snape! I love stories about life, but lately Ive been thinking about the point of life and all we do is the same thing that gets repeated over again and again through our children and there children. I really don't see the point. But then i read about love, and relationships and how people are so content, i think that there is a point to life, to love and to be loved, which can complete people and make them utterly content! soz i didn't mean to bore you with a sob story. Any way i really loved reading your stories and i think that this is something inspirering! I just want something exciting to happen in my life, like Harry's but i suppose that is just the stuff of fairy tales. ok so this has turned out to be much different from a review, but your stories have brought all this emotion out of me! I just feel really effected by your story and that you are a great writer, and i would love for more small stories to be written with this story line. ok then ive blabbered alot in this but i can t be bothered to go and delete parts so im submitting as is! this deserves way more than 10/10!
Author's Response: You know, I just finished writing something really profound lol, but this stupid site and its log in problems just totally messed it up. Basically what I said was I am very happy you have enjoyed this series. I wanted to write something different than some of the Snape/Hermione stories out there. I got some flack from some people about changing Snape and about some changes in Hermione. But this was my vision of them at some future date. After the war, after they have matured more. I wanted to show Snape as a man who at this point in his life wanted to love and be loved. I wanted Hermione to take the role of wife and mother with the same passion she had for learning. I get the feeling you might be a bit restless in your life right now, but hey life is what you make it, remember that. If there is something you want to try and you have the means then do so. I write to express my creativity and to in some way hone my writing skills. I would love to have something published some day and am making notes on an original story. Perhaps I will be as lucky some day as JKR, but if I am not then I can take some comfort in knowing that these small works have been appreciated. It's reviews like yours that make me feel good and like what I am doing means something. Thank you.
hey i really like the refernce to the knights templar, that is like my fav time in history! I love history (as well as hp) so to have them both combined was really great! ive been reading the story and this is the chapter im up to, although you have already finished the story bibai
hey ive been reading the story non stop all night and this is where im up to and i just thought i would say something. I like it very much and think u are a grea writer. one thing that i had trouble with was keeping up with the children, i knew who most of them belonged to but it got a little confusing expecially with some kids refering to people that weren't really there aunts or uncles or wateve. i just found it a little hard to understand, but thats probably just me. i still ove the story though.
Author's Response: I had a time myself with the kids, but I wanted to give each couple two kids. Eventually with the understanding that all the children would get together once they grew up. As for refering to people who aren't really related to them as aunts and uncles, that isn't really odd. I've known many people who refer to close family friends that way. For instance my best friends little ones call me Tia (Spanish for aunt), so do my cousins kids and I'm not really their aunt, not directly. So that's no biggie. I think as you read along it will get easier to separate the kids. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
I'm so sad it's over, but I did so enjoy your stories. Thank you so much for writing them!
Author's Response: I had a hard time ending this too. But, I pretty much had played this particular story out. I would like to revisit them in some short fics in the future. Thank you for reading this. I appreciate all of your kind reviews.
Aw, so sweet. I have enjoyed reading this story so much and it's so sad to see it end. It gave me a different taste; something new, apart from all the other stories I've read. I do hope you'll post your other fic soon. Best regards, ~mspadfoot89~
Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to do something just a little different than the stories I myself had been reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'll have more at some point.
I've noticed that your own work becomes a bit like your child, it is hard to see her grow up and go out into the world. I loved it even with Snape getting all mushy.
Author's Response: You've got that so right. It was hard for me to finish this because I really didn't want to. Of course the story was wirtten out so it had to end. Some people don't like Snape OOC, but I think the moment called for some major feelings. Thanks for taking the time to read this.
I am usually not a Snape/Hermione shipper, but REALLY enjoyed your two fictions. They were very well written. I will enjoy reading another one of your fictions and will keep an eye out for it :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed these. I became a SS/HG shipper myself only about a year or so ago. It's an interesting pairing to write. I'm making notes for a new short story. When I've got something substantial I'll post it. Thanks again for your lovely review.
You're right - it was a lovely ending - just enough was said. I like Osiris and Crookshanks' surprise - awww! I would love to read anthing else that you right! I'll keep watching out for something!
Author's Response: I didn't think it needed any more than what was said and I'm happy you liked it. I do have something brewing in my head right now, nothing long and nothing having to do with this series. I just have to work it out and get it written. It will be a SS/HG fic though. Hopefully I can have something up soon. Thanks for all of your wonderful words throughout this story. I really apprecite it.
awww....so cute! i didnt think oris and crooks would ruin the day, im pleased they did something nice instead. well done i have really enjoyed reading this series.
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured this was a good opportunity for our duo to do something nice and sweet. Thank you for your comments, and I'm really glad you have enjoyed this series. I've had a great time writing it.