Reviewer: XxbrokenxoathxX
Date: 07/30/07 18:43
Chapter: From Under the Bed

ZOMG!! Dumbledore is alive -huggles dumbledore- GaH! I can't wait until you update! ^.^

Reviewer: XxbrokenxoathxX
Date: 07/30/07 18:43
Chapter: From Under the Bed

ZOMG!! Dumbledore is alive -huggles dumbledore- GaH! I can't wait until you update! ^.^

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 07/27/07 17:13
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

Very very very very very very very very amusing!!!!!!!!! I can't stop laughing! (giggles)
-Susan

Reviewer: Lobena Bricatta
Date: 07/25/07 10:40
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

A deeply downtrodden person sits at her desk surrounded by crumpled parchment. Deeply disturbed at the happenings of the last few days and anxiously awaiting the reply that must come. She worries about the great horned owl she has just sent will it return with aid? Or will it be shot down on sight.

If the message is coming through please help me


The Mentor was sitting at his/her desk, it had been a long day. The Fan fic writers had always had horrible grammar and there run on sentences would drive her batty. As she bent low to add another parchment to the to many corrections pile, which happened to sitat the bottom of her/his garbage can. She heard a flutter of wings as a great horned owl swooped down into her/his office. She unraveled the letter quickly and hopefully, casting her eyes at the first three words she new it was going to be a long day. She sat down at her desk and began to read.

I need your help on this most mentally fixating problem
I do not know how to contact any one from here


she/he read on

For the past 3 days I have been diligently working on a fic, My first fic ever. I have attempted about 5 hundred times to submit this fic when I realized it was my formatting at approximately 4 am I finally got it across but this morning it has disappeared from my archive.

I don't know how to get a hold of anyone in here and decided this was my best course of action. Please help me, It really is driving me quite and irreversibly crazy at the moment and I cannot rest until I have overcome this problem.

If you understand my predicament I would love your aid


anxiously awaiting your reply
The most frustrated Lobena


Author's Response: It seems to me that they rejected it for some reason if it disappeared from your archive. Hopefully you have kept a copy somewhere, because they probably deleted what you sent off. Probably they have sent you an e-mail stating the reason why. I'd recommend checking your mail and also checking the Submission Rules and so on. Good luck.

Reviewer: potterscouse
Date: 07/24/07 12:18
Chapter: From Under the Bed

i take back the comment i made on the first chaptr lol this ones much better dw.
ill add u to my fav authors to make up 4 it lool

Reviewer: potterscouse
Date: 07/24/07 12:16
Chapter: From Under the Bed

i take back the comment i made on the first chaptr lol this ones much better dw.
ill add u to my fav authors to make up 4 it lool

Author's Response: Cool, no harm done. As it was evaluated much sooner than I'd thought, I'll see if I can post the next one.

Reviewer: potterscouse
Date: 07/24/07 12:13
Chapter: From Under the Bed

quirky imaginative funny
i want more!!!

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 07/21/07 9:42
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

Oh man, that was good! I loved the beginning, I was just ROFLing throughout it! :D

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, look forward to hearing future feedback.

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 07/20/07 8:30
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

Oh and ignore the rude review posted b4 mine
Some people!
lol

xxx
*SH*

Author's Response: Yes, that's what I usually do when people present insults to me without bothering to back them up or be more specific.

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 07/20/07 7:17
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

Very good first chapter
at the beginning i was like-Umm whats goin on- but then i realised it was a dream and was like-Oh okay! loool-

Ne way well done
Can't wait for update ♥

*SH*

Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate it! Yeah, I figured the beginning might be confusing before Harry wakes up... look forward to hearing your feedback on future chapters.

Reviewer: potterscouse
Date: 07/20/07 6:59
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

you have no writing talent at all and the only redeeming feature about your worthless story is the slightly humourous dream. Go back to reading other people's stories please

Author's Response: Funny, because I thought the dream thing was the weakest part... It just goes to show that we probably have opposing tastes in story content as well as in the tone one should use in negative reviews.

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