Reviewer: Potterlover171
Date: 11/24/07 21:21
Chapter: Dumbledore's Demonstration

I HATE IT!!!!!!!!! First you make it seem like its going very well with everything and then you KILL DUMBLEDORE. HOW COULD YOU??? Even though I HATE the story iIam going to contune to read it. So please update it quickly.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 11/11/07 1:48
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

Good story. I really liked the ordering Kreacher to say a four letter word whenever he mentions Snape.=Sammy

Reviewer: duelingmaster23q
Date: 11/09/07 23:20
Chapter: Dumbledore's Demonstration

Wow, awesome plot twist. Great story

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 11/09/07 14:47
Chapter: Dumbledore's Demonstration

OH NO!!!! It was slightly humorous, but once again, OH NO!!! is there ANY loophole this time???? lets see, they are acting and snape is very smart so he made it so he stupified professor d- i mean dumby with the killing words. if not, OH NO! great chapter by the way.

Reviewer: Amor vincit omnia
Date: 10/28/07 8:50
Chapter: R. A. B.

I love this fic!Keep it coming! :D

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 10/27/07 10:47
Chapter: R. A. B.

hilarious, but still with a serious note. the slughorn scene was the best.

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 09/11/07 15:06
Chapter: Hagrid's Happiest Fantasy

WOW, I keep being continually impressed by the humor that you manage to keep dishing out...the Sorting Hat Song was my favorite! (haha, BTW, I printed the song out so I can show it to my friends :D)

Author's Response: You're making me blush about the Sorting Hat song. Believe it or not, the first drafts of it scanned even more awkwardly.

Reviewer: Sharky_Girl
Date: 09/09/07 21:29
Chapter: Hagrid's Happiest Fantasy

bit short, and kind of thin, but otherwise, very funny

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 08/31/07 22:45
Chapter: The New Neville


Oh, his gran must be so proud of him *tear*

I must say though, this chapter wasn't as spontaneous as the others, but the humor here was great...pity for Crabbe and Goyle!

Keep churnin' them out!!

Reviewer: Estel90
Date: 08/31/07 17:41
Chapter: The New Neville

I think your story is, with the real book in my mind, a little bit creepy... But I never laughed more reading a story here. So: Thanks for the fun, plrease update soon.

(PS: It really is creepy ;-) )

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 08/30/07 17:57
Chapter: The New Neville

Your story is one of the only ones that truly makes me laugh! Hilarious, really good too.

Reviewer: Sharky_Girl
Date: 08/30/07 16:46
Chapter: The New Neville

haha! i loved that last paragraph--The six formed a line, with Harry at the lead, levitating Hermione’s body in front of him. They had decided on Harry because he was the one most accustomed to being stared at while getting off the train.

Reviewer: Sharky_Girl
Date: 08/14/07 10:57
Chapter: The Best Birthday

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe. One question though, how did two guys have a kid? Or when you drink polyjuice does it change EVERYTHING about you? Although i liked the crack about filing for divorce

Author's Response: I never thought too much about Vernon and Petunia procreating, but... I mean, the Polyjuice Potion makes Aberforth a physical replica of Petunia, and since conceiving a child is technically a physical act... I guess poor Aberforth just had to deal with it! Or maybe that was the real Aunt Petunia back then. I always was uncomfortable with cross-gender transformations, but after Rowling did it in book 6...

Reviewer: Sharky_Girl
Date: 08/14/07 10:35
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

i loved the beggining. The dream was hilarious! In fact, I'm going to read it again right now! *raeds story aain* HAHAHAHAAHAHA! Hehe. That dream was really funny. It's fun to imagine voldy-poo saying that. It's also fun to call him voldy-poo. Altough, I don't really like Harry going back to Hogwarts. It just feels wring. Or maybe it's because I've read book seven...

Author's Response: It feels "wrong" to me too, because I never thought that Harry would go back to Hogwarts, not even that Dumbledore would be alive. But to me it was more humorous to write a scenario where he does go back to Hogwarts.

Reviewer: Sharky_Girl
Date: 08/14/07 10:19
Chapter: McGonogall and the Muggles

pretty funny, and very interesting. It has both aspects of a good fanfiction. Humor and storyline. And dumbledore not being dead. :-D I loved the ending on the second chapter. It was just so smugly hilarious.

Reviewer: FlawedHero
Date: 08/09/07 3:21
Chapter: The Best Birthday

Hilarious! I loved every bit of it.

Reviewer: lily_severus_121
Date: 08/08/07 19:11
Chapter: The Best Birthday

omg, that is so hilarious...=)

Reviewer: midnitepotter
Date: 08/08/07 15:57
Chapter: The Best Birthday

Hahahaha, I love this chapter!! Though I was a little shocked at the way Harry was treating his uncle, but PETUNIAABERFORTHPOLYJUICEPOTION!!!1 I found the Scrimgeour amusing too ^o^

Keep it up! Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Yeah, I was aware that Harry was being a little OOC in this chapter, but then again, so was Dudley in Chapter 1 (acting more like his few-years-younger self), so I figured people will have to suspend their disbelief a little...

Reviewer: harrypotterfangirl21
Date: 08/07/07 22:59
Chapter: The Best Birthday

wow. thats really original!
in a good way, of course. :)

Reviewer: lupinslover
Date: 08/07/07 20:23
Chapter: The Best Birthday

Niiiiiiice..... Interesting twist to Harry Potter. I cant wait until you have the other chapters up!

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