I think that the little side note at the end of the story made it. Thank you.
that was so good. i really liked it. great ending! It kinda reminded me of twilight in a way. Keep up the awesome work=)
This story is soo cute. I really like it. You did a really good job on it. My faveroite chapter would probably be the one where shesaid that she killed Anna. It was so freaking funny!
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I think this chapter was funny. When she said I killed Anna, I started laughing out loud and my family glared at me. It was funny.
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I really really like this chapter. I now have the immage of the two professers burned into my mind and it hurts.
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I like this chapter. It's good.
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She better half-admire him.
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That was sooo cute. I'm still smiling as I'm wrighting this.
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I got scared for a second when she fal through. I alsmost thought she was going to die! lol. But then I remembered that they have Harry and stuff like that. I like this chapter. It's good.
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wow amazing i think i may have almost broken our table i was squeezing it so hard!!!! nice job!!!!
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o my gosh i think im going to cry holy cow..... my face is frozen into one of shock.... wow.... that was an interesting chapter but i liked it... something different.... a good kind of different... wow...
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that was a sweet cute ending. not to overly emotional or dramatic. but jsut perfect simple and sweet. great job. i loved erading this fic one of my favorite lily james stories.
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i loved this story so much. it made me cry and laugh with Lily's naked petunia story. the ending was perfect, not overdramtic, just simple but happy.
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Oh. My. God.
*is speechless*
This is sirius-ly one of the best fics I've ever read. I LOVE the ending. I especially like how Lily agreed in the end and didn't play hard to get even though she loved him.
Awesome. =D
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omg! i loved the ending ahhhhh!!!
amazing amazing amazing :)
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OH MY WORD! What a fantastic story. I've only just caught it and I'm so glad I've been able to read it in one sitting. If I'd had to wait for chapters I'd have chewed my fingernails off by now. I think I've read all your stories now and I love your writing. You have an incredible way with words. Your characterisation is superb and your descriptions are amazing. Brilliant as always.
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great story and perfect ending ..i loved the last part (our baby is due in august)...genius!
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Great story! A wording error though... you had Dumbledore say "I wanted to commemorate you two," when you probably meant "commend you two." To commemorate someone requires a public ceremony.
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Great story! A wording error though... you had Dumbledore say "I wanted to commemorate you two," when you probably meant "commend you two." To commemorate someone requires a public ceremony.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll fix that!
Awhh, that was adooorable!
I especially liked this line, on the outskirts of forever. It sounded really poetic to me. ;]
Just so you know, you forgot to make it so it's officially completed. Heh.
Anyway, thank you for a marvelous read!
--Julia
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And I officially completed it! Thanks!)
