Reviews For Swallow Your Pride
Reviewer: goldensunshine
Date: 02/13/11 21:09
Chapter: Happy Endings

I think that the little side note at the end of the story made it. Thank you.

Reviewer: firefawkes
Date: 06/26/09 2:03
Chapter: Happy Endings

that was so good. i really liked it. great ending! It kinda reminded me of twilight in a way. Keep up the awesome work=)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:08
Chapter: Happy Endings

This story is soo cute. I really like it. You did a really good job on it. My faveroite chapter would probably be the one where shesaid that she killed Anna. It was so freaking funny!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:01
Chapter: Learning and Turning

I think this chapter was funny. When she said I killed Anna, I started laughing out loud and my family glared at me. It was funny.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 22:54
Chapter: Tears and a Naked Petunia

I really really like this chapter. I now have the immage of the two professers burned into my mind and it hurts.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 22:46
Chapter: My Poetic Soul

I like this chapter. It's good.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 22:40
Chapter: 'She Wasn't Drowning'

She better half-admire him.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 22:35
Chapter: Alien Heads and Late Night Chats

That was sooo cute. I'm still smiling as I'm wrighting this.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 22:31
Chapter: Charming Dictionaries

I got scared for a second when she fal through. I alsmost thought she was going to die! lol. But then I remembered that they have Harry and stuff like that. I like this chapter. It's good.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: its_prongs_world
Date: 01/27/09 23:21
Chapter: Happy Endings

wow amazing i think i may have almost broken our table i was squeezing it so hard!!!! nice job!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: its_prongs_world
Date: 01/27/09 22:37
Chapter: 'She Wasn't Drowning'

o my gosh i think im going to cry holy cow..... my face is frozen into one of shock.... wow.... that was an interesting chapter but i liked it... something different.... a good kind of different... wow...

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 01/24/09 19:21
Chapter: Happy Endings

that was a sweet cute ending. not to overly emotional or dramatic. but jsut perfect simple and sweet. great job. i loved erading this fic  one of my favorite lily james stories.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 01/02/09 18:33
Chapter: Happy Endings

i loved this story so much. it made me cry and laugh with Lily's naked petunia story. the ending was perfect, not overdramtic, just simple but happy.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 12/27/08 19:21
Chapter: Happy Endings

Oh. My. God.

*is speechless*

This is sirius-ly one of the best fics I've ever read. I LOVE the ending. I especially like how Lily agreed in the end and didn't play hard to get even though she loved him.

Awesome. =D



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 12/25/08 12:51
Chapter: Happy Endings

omg! i loved the ending ahhhhh!!!
amazing amazing amazing :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 12/07/08 8:23
Chapter: Happy Endings

OH MY WORD! What a fantastic story. I've only just caught it and I'm so glad I've been able to read it in one sitting. If I'd had to wait for chapters I'd have chewed my fingernails off by now. I think I've read all your stories now and I love your writing. You have an incredible way with words. Your characterisation is superb and your descriptions are amazing. Brilliant as always.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! Your review made my day! :)

Reviewer: siriuslysirius92
Date: 12/04/08 22:43
Chapter: Charming Dictionaries

great story and perfect ending ..i loved the last part (our baby is due in august)...genius!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 12/04/08 14:01
Chapter: Tears and a Naked Petunia

Great story! A wording error though... you had Dumbledore say "I wanted to commemorate you two," when you probably meant "commend you two." To commemorate someone requires a public ceremony.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll fix that!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 12/04/08 13:58
Chapter: Tears and a Naked Petunia

Great story! A wording error though... you had Dumbledore say "I wanted to commemorate you two," when you probably meant "commend you two." To commemorate someone requires a public ceremony.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll fix that!

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 12/03/08 16:34
Chapter: Happy Endings

Awhh, that was adooorable!
I especially liked this line, on the outskirts of forever. It sounded really poetic to me. ;]
Just so you know, you forgot to make it so it's officially completed. Heh.
Anyway, thank you for a marvelous read!
--Julia

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And I officially completed it! Thanks!)

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