Reviews For Whirlwind
Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/02/07 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 2 or With a Heavy Heart

Oh that's so sad that Hermione isn't ever going to see Ron again! She'll probably be a bit upset that they parted angry, but I think the way you portrayed their fight was incredibly accurate. And your beta did a very good job on this chapter too, you said he instead of the twice, but most people just read over that. Like I said, I think I'm a bit touched in the head to even notice things like that.

Author's Response: Your reviews make me smile! Now, I have to be extra careful with my writing. Haha, thank you for taking the time to right me such lengthy reviews. I'm going to hop on and fix those mistakes you found. Thank you!!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/02/07 17:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 or With a Nefarious Purpose

Even if there isn't alot of action there is soooo much suspense! I love it! And I totally don't mind having to wait on Oliver, as long as he does come back. And I didn't even find anything to nit pick! Congrats! (I am so hard to please that way, sorry about last chapter. It's just what I do.)

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/02/07 16:44
Chapter: Prologue or With the Flick of a Switch

I love Oliver Wood, in my opinion there are deffinitely not enough fics about him. I only have one little thing for you to check. In the first paragraph you completely left off the last word (which I'm guessing is brow, but it might not be, so you may just want to edit that). Other than that it was super, and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: foreverstrange
Date: 08/01/07 7:38
Chapter: Chapter 1 or With a Nefarious Purpose

Wow. I love your descriptive writing style.
The characters are great, like they should be written. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's so nice knowing that people are actually reading what I write. Thank you for taking the time to review! I can't wait for the next chapter either...now if only I could write it ; D

Reviewer: AdrianaGodric
Date: 07/27/07 3:23
Chapter: Prologue or With the Flick of a Switch

Awesome writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you chose to read it!

Reviewer: EmilytheGreat
Date: 07/23/07 17:15
Chapter: Prologue or With the Flick of a Switch

Really really good writing. :)

Author's Response: thank you so much! Reviews are what keeps me writing, and I'm glad you took the time to write me one!!

Reviewer: num
Date: 07/19/07 8:37
Chapter: Prologue or With the Flick of a Switch

Oooooo! This is beautifully written, I can't wait for the story to gather momentum

Author's Response: haha me too! Thank you!

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