Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 10/14/07 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

good beginning but it is a bit confusing. ill sit it out though. it sounds very promising. :P

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 10/13/07 16:15
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

This story is going onto my favorites. It was beyond wonderful. It is undescribable! I love it.

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 10/13/07 16:07
Chapter: Chapter 10: Ain't No Sunshine When She's Gone

YAY!!! I adore it :) You did a great job writing this scene and heck, the whole story.

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 10/13/07 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which There There Was a Misunderstanding

Oh lord have mercy. Pregnant? I love it! :) I hope they stay together!

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 10/13/07 15:06
Chapter: Chapter 4: Consults, Insults, and Results

Go Hermione! I like how the story is progressing. Good job!

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 10/13/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

I'm so glad that this isn't the last chapter there is and that there is acually another chapter so I don't have to wait. I like it a lot so far. Now...to find out what Hermione's plan is.

Reviewer: Kyria of Delphi
Date: 10/11/07 0:20
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Enjoyed this very much. Very nice.

Reviewer: Kyria of Delphi
Date: 10/11/07 0:17
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Enjoyed this very much. Very nice.

Reviewer: Kyria of Delphi
Date: 10/10/07 23:40
Chapter: Chapter 8: Tonight's the Night

I would have added a notation about the freckles on his shoulders. But that was very tastefully done.

Reviewer: Kyria of Delphi
Date: 10/10/07 23:03
Chapter: Chapter 6: Howling Owls

Lovely. Enjoying this story very much. Although I do think your Harry is just a shade too sanctimonious. Other than that it is delightful.

Reviewer: MsNightS
Date: 10/09/07 21:02
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I really enjoyed this, very well written. :)

Reviewer: nymphadora625
Date: 10/03/07 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

By far, one of the best, if not the best fic, I have ever read on mugglenet. Please keep it up.

Reviewer: antigeech
Date: 09/29/07 20:19
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

This creation was beautiful in all its entirety.

Reviewer: St_Liar
Date: 09/24/07 18:29
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I loved it!

Reviewer: St_Liar
Date: 09/24/07 17:28
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I loved it!

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 09/24/07 11:07
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Great story - you write really well. Both Hermione and Severus were written in a way that seemed true to their canon characters, even though this pairing is decidedly non-canon. I'll have to go and read all your other stories now! (well, maybe not right now - it's 2 am).

Reviewer: candyappley
Date: 09/21/07 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Ministry of Magic are Morons

looove the name of your chapter, i hate the ministry!!

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/13/07 22:38
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

Awww! They better hook up soon, though because we only have 8 more chapters. Lol. I'm still marveling at how you managed it...

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/13/07 22:33
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

Awww! They better hook up soon, though because we only have 8 more chapters. Lol. I'm still marveling at how you managed it...

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/12/07 22:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Ministry of Magic are Morons

Excellent set-up for Hermione and Snape, and once again the dialogue seemed to flow together wonderfully. It's amazing that you fit this all into 11 chapters, but I suppose it's possible. :-x

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