Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/20/08 22:59
Chapter: Chapter 4: Consults, Insults, and Results

I really love these long chapters!! Fantastic fan fic =)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/20/08 22:53
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

Terrific chapter! I would be really nice to see Prof. Snape get out of prison but nothing is ever easy with him ;-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/20/08 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Ministry of Magic are Morons

Great chapter! Very well written also ;-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/20/08 22:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

Interesting first chapter!

Reviewer: binkybye102
Date: 01/19/08 0:19
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

that was an amazing conclusion to your story! I loved the vignettes showing their lives (and grandkids, yay!); instead of just stopping at a declaration of love, you showed it all the way through! The story was amazing. Brilliant job!

Reviewer: Lady_Lupin
Date: 01/16/08 15:32
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Your stories are always so good! :)

Reviewer: bobdylan
Date: 12/31/07 11:43
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Perfectly wonderful. I love your stories!

Reviewer: steppenwolf88
Date: 12/29/07 20:33
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

"one who had been married before, was past the age of romance, but who knew how to make a house into a home, and who knew how to be a woman in her man’s bed" These words made me stop reading. How can you be so sexist? The whole chapter is full of this crap. Do you really think that women should just stay at home, have babies and please their husbands in bed? That is so sad, I can't imagine how someone could possibly be happy in that sort of releationship. I know this is one of those reviews no one wants to receive ever, therefor I want to make clear that I like the way you write, It's just the sexist content that is keeping me from reading. Regards and sorry for my bad english!

Author's Response: Dear Steppenwolf, Please keep in mind that each of the characters in a story have their own personalities, and not all of them are representative of the character of the author.

I don't think it's outside the realm of possibility, however, that a man of Severus' age, who has grown up in the wizarding world, might have some old-fashioned views of the world. Take, for example, Molly Weasley. She is our representative of how a pure-blood witch conducts her marriage and her home. Would you care to tell her to her face that her way of life is sexist? I wouldn't.

Whether you choose to continue to read, or not, is up to you, of course. I think this is one of my best stories and that it is worth the pay-off to finish reading it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.


Reviewer: silent_heartbeat
Date: 12/20/07 12:01
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

it's even better the second time around, lol.


Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/16/07 0:49
Chapter: Chapter 8: Tonight's the Night

you're not serious! mad-eye and mcgonagall?!? I like it...

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 12/15/07 20:26
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Another amazing story from the almighty Subversa! I love your writing, and I truly can't wait until your next fic, and I'm hoping there is one. I think Hermione/Snape is your best writing, but I'm also growing into your Remus/Tonks. I loved how you tied all the couples together, and your plotline was truly a work of art. Again, this was amazing, and I look forward to your next work. ~Zimmy

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 12/15/07 17:24
Chapter: Chapter 10: Ain't No Sunshine When She's Gone

Love this, love it even more than after reading the last chapter. Im glad Ginne_Weasley31 was able to convince you to write about Pregnant!Hermione! You pull it off nicely (Just as you pull of Generous!Snape quite well) ~zimmy

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 12/15/07 17:04
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which There There Was a Misunderstanding

This is very good... I know I'm not reviewing each chapter, but it's too good for me to frequently stop between chapters... ^_^ Love it! ~Zimmy

Reviewer: romero
Date: 12/06/07 23:26
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I loved your story. I admit that I was crying by the end. Thank you for a great read.

Reviewer: green eyed doll
Date: 11/24/07 15:42
Chapter: Chapter 5: What's Love Got To Do With It

I love the way you keep the characters in line with their true nature. Snape's comment about the points and Hermione's reaction was brilliant - and added a touch of humor. God job!

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 11/06/07 7:19
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Now that's an epilogue!

Reviewer: Lilly Willow
Date: 10/26/07 22:11
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

An absolutely fabulous tale!! Completely filled with wonder, it is truely a story that will make you laugh, cry, and find new love for the character of Severus Snape.

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 10/20/07 14:41
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I swear I will love this story forever and ever! You deserve the amount of reviews that you got and I'm proud to be the one to bump it up to 100. Congrats and thanks for the beautiful story!

~Beauty Fades

Reviewer: rose421013
Date: 10/20/07 14:25
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I liked this story so much better than DH! Severus deserved everything you gave to him. Thank you.

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 10/19/07 7:38
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

I love your dialogue. It's extremly well written and very enjoyable. Every word has a point and every point flows perfectly with the replies. I must admit that I am just a tad jealous. :)

But I suppose since you had like... 7 betas that that helped out some, huh? Lol. Onto the next chapter!

-Beauty Fades

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