Reviewer: jpflores67
Date: 04/23/10 13:32
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

This is the best Snape/Hermione fan fic I've ever read. Thank you for this.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/27/10 17:47
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

That was too wonderful. I am openly crying. What a beautiful ending. Now why couldn't it have really ended that way? I think my favorite scene was when Ron met Hermione again at Harry's and Ginny's wedding. But it was all good. I think this is a story I will read again. Excellent story. Thanks for writing this.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/26/10 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 10: Ain't No Sunshine When She's Gone

I am misty-eyed. I love that you had Eileen break the news to her son. It was funny when Severus showed up all angry at the door only to find Harry about to propose to Ginny. I wish we could have patronuses for real. I always wonder what mine would look like. I'd always hoped for a large dog:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/25/10 18:39
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which There There Was a Misunderstanding

That was so romantic. I'm so happy that Hermione got pregnant. I wonder if Harry told Slughorn that the liquid luck was for Hermione:P What a wonderful side effect. I loved the scene at the office when Severus had to ask Hermione not to leave him. Talk about a misunderstanding. What an excellent chapter. I hate to think that this story's almost over. I hope Hermione can tell Severus about the baby without too much melodrama.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/25/10 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 8: Tonight's the Night

That was pretty cool. I felt bad for Hermione thinking she needed liquid luck. I felt bad that her self-esteem was so low but I suppose I would have felt the same if faced with Severus Prince. I would think "I'm a lucky girl indeed--now what's gonna go wrong." I was surprised by McGonagall and Moody--surprised but happy:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/24/10 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 7: Only An Owl Away

I can't help but feel bad for both Severus and Hermione. I'd be sick about now if I were them. I think both of them will make the best of this situation if we can just get Severus home for dinner:D I have a feeling that both of them will be pleasantly surprised with married life. I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope Hermione's not too drunk to enjoy her wedding night:P Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/10 21:40
Chapter: Chapter 6: Howling Owls

I always love a good Howler. Eileen sure deserved one. That was quite mean to lock the doors behind Hermione. I got misty-eyed thinking about Severus falling asleep with Hermione's wedding picture in his hand. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/10 21:20
Chapter: Chapter 5: What's Love Got To Do With It

I am all in favor of Hermione marrying Severus but I was so sad to imagine the wedding at the prison. However sad it seemed, though, I think Hermione's in for a very pleasant surprise when she and Severus actually do live together. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/10 19:07
Chapter: Chapter 4: Consults, Insults, and Results

So, that's what it took--Severus had to be made to see what his contribution to the marriage would be. I feel so sad that they can't have children. Is it possible that the diagnosis of sterility is inaccurate? This is such an interesting story. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/10 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 3: The Stupidest Idea Ever

I can imagine Snape's shock upon seeing Hermione and hearing her proposal. I can also imagine Harry's shock at having given Hermione the idea in the first place. Things look bleak. I wonder how Hermione's going to convince him that he should marry her:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/10 17:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Ministry of Magic are Morons

How sad that Hermione's parents died--muggles dead as a result of the wizarding war. You've come up with some really creative ideas for this story: Ron's career; McGonagall's and Moody's business Hermione's choice of study. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 02/23/10 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

Strangely, I loved the thought of an Avada Colada:D I'm guessing that Snape took Hermione to the hospital after she was hit with that devastating curse. Hermione not being able to have children is a new twist. You know things like that must have happened during the war. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Secret shadows
Date: 09/25/09 23:59
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Okay, this is one of, if not the most wonderful Snape/Hermione I've read so far! Oh, it brought tears to my eyes, this epilogue did (along with the movie RENT, haha_! I much enjoyed your plot, and am hoping to see more and more from you, Subversa! I adore all your works. (:

Reviewer: hogwarts4_life
Date: 09/16/09 21:34
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

amazing, wonderful and heartfelt most of all touching

Reviewer: severus_sirius_draco_hermione
Date: 08/24/09 14:27
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

This was AWESOME! So wonderful and so sweet that Hermione and Severus did have a child. I can see Felicity being spoiled by Severus until Hermione put her foot down, and then Sev continuing to spoil her in secret! Lovely job!

Reviewer: jenkent
Date: 07/15/09 21:27
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Aww...this was such a wonderful story! Great job! I LOVED it! You wrote Hermione's and Severus' characters well. Keep up the amazing work!~Jen

Reviewer: Shadolily
Date: 07/02/09 23:52
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I loved this story. Extremely.

Reviewer: Elliekat
Date: 06/30/09 22:12
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

That was great. I loved his pet name for Hermione. And the inclusion of the Felix Felices potion for their first time together and the happy result of Felicity were a wonderful idea. Too bad we muggles can't take such a potion to ease that kind of awkwardness in love.LOL

Thanks for posting!


Reviewer: amberleaf
Date: 01/12/09 13:54
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Just wanted to say that was the best HGSS story i have read it made me laugh and cry all in the right places

Reviewer: TheDuchess
Date: 10/26/08 20:56
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Wow!! That was SO fantastic!! You did an amazing job.

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