Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/11/07 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

Wonderful first chapter. I loved how well written your decriptions were and also how you kept us guessing for awhile on some things. Goodness you have a lot of beta's, girl! lol. No wonder it's squeeky clean.

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 09/05/07 18:54
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

very, very, good story! I loved it so much!!!!

Reviewer: pius
Date: 09/02/07 3:27
Chapter: Chapter 8: Tonight's the Night

Re: Sic nostrum veneficus redimio nos et unus

Um, the latin roughly translates as
"Thus I, the magic, we and one, encircle our ?" It doesn't grammatically make sense, so it's hard to translate. "redimio" is literally "I crown" or "I encircle," and doesn't make a ton of sense as uniting or joining, but I could see how you might use it. However, you'd have to make it third person redimit "it [joining] encircles".

"veneficus" as a noun means magician or sorcerer, not magic itself, "veneficium" is the generic term, however, it has a rather negative connotation associated with poison (which, I admit, is interesting considering the character, but probably innapropriate for a general incantation) but then you've got to put it into the genitive (of or possesive, i.e. joining of magics or magics' joining... I like plural, but you could do singular too. As an alternative, carmen, which is usually "song" but sometimes "charm" or "ritual" is poetic and useful, but to be horribly literal one would probably use ars magica- artis magicae or artum magicarum in the genitive singular and plural respectively.
I have ommitted the "as one" because it's really superfluous, since unification necessarily means "as one," and Latin tends to conserve words as much as possible (though clearly not syllables).

So we end up with something like this using my choice of vocabulary: Sic jungendum nostrorum carminum (nostri carminis-singular) nos conjungit

Or something like this with your words: Sic jungendum nostri venefici nos redimit
Both essentially mean, "Thus the joining of our magic unites us"

Thanks for letting me bore you with Latin grammar!

Reviewer: sunshine_ak_99
Date: 09/02/07 3:23
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

That was such a great story. I couldn't stop reading. I sat and read the entire thing in one night. Thanks!

Reviewer: GreenEyed SilverDoe
Date: 08/26/07 15:37
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Totally Enjoyed it!! :)

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 08/23/07 18:01
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Overall a very good story. Finished it in 24 hours. I like your work. The romance is good, don't get so hung up on the sex part of it though...let it come naturally, don't force it. Sex is only a side effect of the love. This is my favorite ship, so keep them coming.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 08/23/07 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 8: Tonight's the Night

Wow!!! Again!! That was very romantic, whew, now I need a drink!!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 08/23/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 7: Only An Owl Away

Wow....I really liked this chapter..I like how each one of them is scared witless, yet the yearning for the other is building. Awesome job.

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 08/22/07 16:51
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I really liked your story. It is completely believable that Hermione would want to "save" Snape and that Snape would fall in love in spite of himself.

I have been escaping into fanfiction in an attempt to block out the epilogue from DH. It is amazing how much chemistry these two characters have. Good work.

(I could have done without the part about Snape working his way through the women of the Order, though. That part did seem OOC.)

Reviewer: red wine
Date: 08/22/07 12:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

ooh, poor Hermione, you made me instantly feel for her...I love her determind loyalty to Snape and what is right- she such a positive force for good... she needs a bit of happines I'd say ;)

Reviewer: VB StaR 08
Date: 08/19/07 11:12
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

OMG wow amazingly done !!!!

Reviewer: jagsgurl15
Date: 08/15/07 23:42
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

wow. this story had me crying more than once! amazing job!

Reviewer: anglesandgobblins
Date: 08/15/07 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

I LOVED IT!!! u're the most creative and best HG/SS shiper so far! this story is soooo beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes! i'm such a snape fan myself, but i always frowned over a HG/SS ship - but man this story is beautiful! it has totally convinced me. U're SUCH a good write! wow. keep it up! =D write some more HG/SS please! i'm sure they'd be just as good as this one! From all HG/SS stories, this is my Favourite! it's like a fairy tale! Snape soooo deserves this! omg i love u! lols, k, i shall stop ranting and tell you one last time how much i appreciate this story! it's beautiful =) please do keep writing!

Reviewer: katj3721
Date: 08/14/07 9:12
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

A fantastic story. Thank you!

Reviewer: ladyliver
Date: 08/13/07 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which There There Was a Misunderstanding

This was a fun chapter.

I danced around chanting "Go to hell Severus" for a good while ^.^

Reviewer: tonks and lupin
Date: 08/10/07 0:10
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

Wow this is by far my favorite story on Fanfiction i think i have read the whole thing through about 5 times and I enjoy more everytime! You are truly a phenomenal writer and i hope you write even more stories just as good as this one!

Reviewer: callamikaela
Date: 08/08/07 19:25
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

what an amazing story, and i can see you have put alot of hard work into this. The characters were believable and true to character. You have an amazing talent thankyou for sharing it.

Reviewer: relichunter18
Date: 08/08/07 18:54
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye

I don't know if I've ever commented on one of your stories, but I know I've read a few. They have some of the best characterization in fanfiction! Your Snape is believable when he's not being snarky!

Reviewer: bumble_bea4life
Date: 08/07/07 23:08
Chapter: Epilogue: In the Blink of an Eye


Reviewer: lcandyn
Date: 08/06/07 4:53
Chapter: Chapter 1: How We Come to Be Here

great story...loved it
you are the best when it comes to HGSS the rest of your fanfictions this rocked..
please keep writing snape:)

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