oh this is good so far. I sorta think that Mikaela isn't very Malfoyish, and that Molly Jayne is still ooc, even after reading the forums, but overall, its pretty good!
Author's Response: How can Molly Jayne be OOC? She's an original character, like Mikaela. Anyway, thanks for your review. I'm going to try and continue this story. Thank you!