Reviews For Loneliness
Reviewer: solemnlyswear_x
Date: 11/15/07 19:27
Chapter: How it all began

Wow, powerful ending - having Merope know she was going to die built up to it nicely.

One thing, Then everything went black as my last breathe escaped my body. That 'breathe' should be 'breath.'

Looks like the next chapter will be from Tom's POV, right? Can't wait to see what happens. =)

Author's Response: Thanks, I haven't updated at all yet, but I am planning on doing so soon. So Keep an eye out!

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