Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 03/25/08 18:40
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

Very nice! The title was what caught my eye, and the repetition of Love behind the veil was extremely effective in the poem. I, like everyone else who has reviewed, also loves how you broke up the last line. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ Your review has made my day! I'm delighted you liked my little poem, as it's my first ever fanfiction. Might I also say that I adored your "Luna Poems" ?

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 08/05/07 10:21
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

Hey-lo! This is a thanks for reviewing my poem, I just realized that you had one when i checked your bio!

I liked this poem very much, it was a good read, and you tell your story pretty powerfully to hbe honest.

I agree with mah buddy Kate down there, I love how you split the last "Love, Behind the Veil", I actually took it to mean that at the end of this poem we think that it's the veil telling us something itself, like a letter, cuz obviously thats how you end a letter.

Great Work! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, lady magician! I really apprciate your review and I'm glad you liked the poem (because I loved yours! :) ). At the ending I was trying to refer to the fact that the power Voldy knows not is love, but I actually thought the way you interpreted it was really cool. Again, thanks for the review! Can't wait to read more of your poems! :) - fawkeshermione

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 07/20/07 18:47
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

Wow, incredible poem. It is very different and a great read. I hope to see more of your work up soon! ^_^ Keep writing!

Reviewer: unicorn_blood_love
Date: 07/15/07 21:02
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

...
sweet




i like it
its got good rhythm
i like rhythm :P

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: unicorn_blood_love
Date: 07/15/07 21:01
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

...
sweet




i like it
its got good rhythm
i like rhythm :P

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 07/14/07 15:37
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

Fantastic, I loved it! Continue to write poetry, you have talent!

Author's Response: Thanks, Prongs92! I really appreciate your review, and I'm glad you liked the poem. ; )

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 07/14/07 9:24
Chapter: Love behind the Veil

This is your *first* poem? Wow. It's absolutely amazing. The rhyming is amazing, the repetition superb, the idea and meaning behind it is awesome. *shocked* I really have no nitpicks for this. It's amazing.

I absolutely love the ending, too - the way you broke up the line 'love behind the veil' to 'love, / behind the veil'. That was well done, in my opinion. I like the way it matches up with the line before it before breaking off. ;-) If that makes sense, which I doubt.

Kate

Author's Response: Yay! Finally - a review! Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me. (and yes, it does make sense) :D

Author's Response: Also - I'm amazed that you had no nitpicks. Thanks again! : )

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