Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 07/11/07 21:34
Chapter: Last Moments of Insanity

Hey! Wow, nice job! I love all the detail, the bitterness, the metaphor with the rock. You did a good job getting me into Barty's head.

Calling himself the fungus his father never understood was really a nice touch too. You did a fantastic job on this. Lol, my dad is obsessed with rock-skipping too. =-)
Mia

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Mia! It was strange writing from Crouch Jr.'s PoV, but it was also oddly fun. I've never understood how to skip rocks, lol, I got all the stuff about snapping the wrist and keeping your arm parallel to the surface off the internet. :P Thanks for the sweet review! :)

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