Prologue - The Darkness of the Moon
You are very right: this is a short prologue! I was surprised. But I'm actually kind of glad that your chapters are going to be short. I rather prefer short chapters, unlike the majority of everyone.
So far it seems like a steady start. I'm not so sure this would have been best as a prologue--maybe just as part of a regular chapter. That's what I would have done, I think. Nonetheless, I'm definitely eager to read more, as I always am with your stories. I actually don't read many stories in this category either, but I'm totally ready to love this one. =]
Author's Response: I don't know if you read my reply to your review on my other w.i.p in r/h category but news are better for this one. the first chapter is in queue. so there's an update on the way. As for the short prologue, I think it goes with the general style I chose for this story. All chapters will be short. About 1000 to 1700 words. In my head, they are almost like a description of a picture you are watching and the entire story will be like you are looking thought a photo album while somebody is describing what was happening at that particular time. There will be a short insight by remus at the start and then the usual narrative style for the lenght of the chapter. I don't know if this will work or not but it's something I wanted to try. In the end, it will be about 14 chapters, but the word count won't be impressive.
Anyway, I'm sure you'll let me know what you think as it progresses. Thanks a lot for you review and I apologize for the huge delay in between your review and my reply/update.