Wow, that was really good. I especially liked the way Harry kept the other two away from the house.
The traps were well thought out and well written. I like that Harry thought they were crude, but to think them up was something rather good.
Even though he didn't send out the red sparks, I think Ron and Hermione will come running when the explosion happens. Unless the house is protected, and the sound doesn't carry to them in the graveyard.
Great story, and I am going to read the other two that go with it tomorrow.
See you in the reviews then.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for leaving me such great reviews! :)
Author's Response: I hope that means you sort of liked it.
wow this was really good i read home and recovery and i found this, it makes everything kind of fall into place keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
I liked it, but I wish you could add what happen next.
I really like your stories
Author's Response: But I did! You can find out what happened next in my story, 'Recovery', and the sequel, 'Home'. Thanks for reviewing!
I'm definately going to read the next two stories...
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy them, and thanks for reviewing!