Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 05/19/08 20:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

aww. nice Snape story. One quibble- patronuses, even fluffy bunny ones, are silver, not pink. but maybe you could say it looked as if it would be pink if it had color. but it's interesting to have blaise be a biographer- maybe you could give a little more insight into his character, how he became interested in writing? just a thought.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 11/30/07 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sn iff* poor snape!!!! good story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 07/14/07 11:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow... tha's very sad, yet very sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: harmony123
Date: 07/13/07 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was beautiful, i'm speechless

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Abz
Date: 07/10/07 13:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ah, i too felt like hugging snape. This was a good idea for a story, though i don't know if i can uimagine Blaise as an emotion-writer. Still good though.

Author's Response: Thanks! With Blaise, you have a lot to work with. I don't think he was that close to Malfoy; I tend to think that Malfoy used him to get information on Slughorn. He doesn't seem like the Death Eater type, but he looks like a good judge of character.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 07/09/07 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really don't think you were going for humor, but I almost laughed at the pink bunny. I really did.

it would be great from a writing perspective if you could find a more subtle way to describe the idea in the last line.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

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