great chapter. i really liked the way you closed it. gives us readers a bit of closure but lets us know important stuff is on the way! i read your response for the first review and i just realized why toms name had sounded so familiar! LOL. not the sharpest crayon in the crayola box if you know what i mean. but i heart this chapter! and the long waits between chapters has been killing me. cut a girl some slack will you? j/k. keep up the wonderful work.
P.S. can you please set jerry up with someone? i know hes into tonks and all but i feel sorry for the poor guy.
Author's Response: You remember the important parts, that makes me happy! Whatever details get fuzzy I'm more than willing to jog your memory. :D
loved this latest installment, fab and full of excitement! I adored Nym's kitten act, flirtatious and fun with a hint of danger, wicked :D can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Remus does too. :D Ta, Thanks!
I liked that vow-i agree that sometimes it would be good to have a vow that was serious but didn't warrant death, so good thinking! Ah, childhood memories...French classes were so much better then, when we just sang songs instead of learning the conditional. ;(
I love 'interrogation' scenes, you write Tonks really well...it reminded me of the practice interrogation that she had with her friends in the first fic of this series. i've totally forgotten the names, because i am possibly the first person ever at remembering names. Faces I can do fine, but names...not so much.
Author's Response: Yay, you like the wizard's handshake! Maybe I'm contrary like Sirius, but I don't like it when things are made conditional...love, verb tenses, LOL. The friends were Julia and Tom (Fenton, not Felton, :D) and I had a lot of fun writing it, so thank you for enjoying the interrogation scenes in the stories!
OMG LOVE EDNA FROM THE INCREDIBLES! LOL! Anyhoo. I also love dumbledore, i can really imagine him being serene when confronted by tonks' costume for halloween...arrggh that's annoying. My computer is a mac and it KEEPS correcting my spelling even when i'm on the internet where there is like a whole different language. For instance, no one told the geeks at mac that arrgh is an acceptable and fully comprehensible term on the internet. Or that I'm in ENGLAND, where some words are spelt differently than in california. Phew. that was a long and completely irrelevant rant.
MEGAMAGGOT! Dude, I want a megamaggot t-shirt. i think we should persuade some t-shirt company that making megamaggot tees would be very profitable because of all the people who read this fic. And to my computer... STOP TELLING ME MEGAMAGGOT ISN'T A REAL WORD. I KNOW ALREADY.
Author's Response: Yay for you loving Edna! After Dumbly despising Severus when his own past was so much worse, I like Alberforth better, lol. Poor you, grappling with computer spelling. Can't you just set it to UK language? The band Slipknot calls their fans "Maggots" :D, so they might object, but we can always have our own tees made. If I get one done, I'll send you the picture. (heck, I'll put a link on my profile page! :P)
Ahh, damn, the S evaded my use of scrummyness... I didn't notice until it was too late. Oh well... Class is starting, so better take my leave again, hehe xD
Author's Response: Crummyness would've worked, but Scrummyness speaks to all readers, lol. Hope you're getting top marks in class since you're so punctual! ;)
I love that, "Yes, I have a vision', so funny. Can't wait to learn about Remus' reaction and Dix's! Even though I hate the Times Roman Font
If you change your skin to "elegance" from dragon or whatever you're using, the font is Verdana....so much easier on the eyes to read! (and the green is very spring-like and pretty. :D)
No need for html codes anymore, I see. *rolls eyes*
Gasp! No multiple responses to a reader's review either! How is that an upgrade? Why am I talking to myself?
Too much diet coke hast thou, poor Kerichi.
Nay! I may not be the first to review this time. But I shall strive to be for the next! This chapter caught me unawares, is all. But the wait was worth it :D
Although I could rabidly list the delish opportunity to read more Remus crummyness, and dwell on Hook's nose, I have a friend yanking my leash for a walk. Alas, she needs fruit, and I need Barbossa's green apple and a bubbly coke, so shopping we go.
Wonderful chapter! I might return with a better review when I have time, unless you post before that, then I shall review THAT chapter! xD
Cheers! Until next read, love.
Author's Response: I think you mean Remus' scrummyness (scrumminess?), unless you think his situation is miserable and wretched, lol. With site problems and upgrades keeping me from posting, I'm thrilled there's a chapter for you to read, period! (Although your 'I'm first' gloatings do brighten my days.)<p>You mentioning Barbossa is a funny coincidence, sorta, kinda. I was just talking about how marvellous Geoffrey Rush was as Shakespeare's patron in Shakespeare in Love. After The Princess Bride's "Inconceivable!" It's a mystery from SIL is my second favorite line. <p>Adieu! Parting is sweet sorrow.
Long time no read! Wondered where you were.
I 'm wondering how you're going to end this one. I do see a little cannon seeping in. Jennifer
Author's Response: Site problems and the upgrade kept me from submitting chapters, but yay! problems are fixed (mostly, lol). Lots of canon will seep in. That's the challenge, to keep with canon, yet tell the story that wasn't told, because it belonged to Remus and Tonks, not Harry. ;)
Yep, I'm another girl how thinks "Leukhendian Signed" is just as amazing as our dear Kerichi by only reading her XD
I must go and check out her (or is it a "his"?)profile... must be something interesting to read!!!
Gosh! Long time without reading this fic!
mmmm longer time without reading a Pinkie Tonks! I miss her! Xd
Take care author!
Author's Response: I'll admit, I'm proud of what abfab readers I have! *note it's plural, por favor, lol* I don't think Leuky has posted anything here, but I'm glad I did so I get to read your reviews! There's no pinkie Tonks next chapter, but she does change her hair for Halloween. Ah-woo! :D
This is just one one great R/T story by YOU!!!!!! More please!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and enjoying it! I'm waiting for the site upgrade to submit the next chapter...which rocks, lol. I don't know what third party is holding things up, but I wish they'd hurry up, already! :D
next chapter next chapter!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I can't wait for the site to upgrade so I can submit a chapter without fearing an apocalypse! Thank you for wanting the next chapter. I promise you'll really enjoy it! ^_~
I love your way, onve again, of twisting rond the story and evidence so you explain how they could still be in love and at the same time seem to be not in love. And will with his sandwiches...
Author's Response: It's all point of view, isn't it? :D I shake my head to think of all the readers who hated Snape until the end of book 7 and now gush over him. (Okay, maybe I curl my lip at them too, LOL)
that person who reviewed right before me is strange in a cool way. i'm gonna see if she has any stories.
Author's Response: Deja vu review! There's a glitch in the Matrix. :D
that person who reviewed right before me is strange in a cool way. i'm gonna see if she has any stories.
Author's Response: Are you referring to your review or Leukhendian's? :D I don't think she has a story on MN, but I'd read it if she did post. I bet she'd be great at humour. :)
This was a great chapter!!! evrytime i go on mugglenet the first thing i always do is check for updates on this story. it's official. i'm addicted. i can't wait for tonks and remus to finally see each other again and am i the only one that thinks jerry may have a little crush on tonks? i just finished writing my first story EVER and am mucho excited. i'd be honored if a succesful writer like yourself would read a nd review once i't been validayed. ah-mazing chapter. sincerly, your loyal reader -Aalaa =)
Author's Response: Yay for you writing a story! I'll definitely read it. Jerry has been fighting feelings for Tonks since chapter 20 of Once in a Blue Moon, but his determination not to speak when she's in a relationship is going to be tested... ^_^
I HAVE... RETURNED...!
*glowers as crickets chirp*
Oh well, yes I'm back. Remember? The bad, bad reader who keeps forgetting to review? You got it.
I cherished this chap, but I'm getting slightly re-HBP-depressed over the hovering doomy mood of Tonks. Bubble-gum pink for Tonkses all-around! Chin up, snog on, eh? :D Oh well, it has to get worse before it gets better. I know.
So I gotta tell you, I just spent some precious time searching my accustomed username on Google, as I do once or twice a year, lol. It helps reassuring me if anybody might have stolen the name, which is deeply original from my novel-in-the-works.
So anyway, of course a bunch of MNFF pages popped up, mainly containing review pages where my name occurred. I discovered that the two lassies aintcrazy4you and LaneTechFreshie mentioned me and you both as "cool" and "tremendously funny" and "some pretty funny chicks" in reviews of More Than a Feeling. I didn't know! Neither that I was tremendously funny (crazy maybe), nor that I was a hen's offspring. Well, I may suspicions, but anyhow... Say my thanks to them if you hear from them, eh? And I'd love to know if they engage name-calling me again, lol.
Darling aintcrazy4you namely mentioned our old "terrorist writers" chat. And from there I went on to read some of my crazier reviews. Lady of the Flies, what a precious memory. The blood must still rest somewhere in the microscopic fibres of my desk surface... Delightful.
I want to be funny again! But how...?
*ponders for a full 5 seconds*
I know! To get so funny that others review about your review, one must get back in the game. For starters, I had forgotten about my raging ambition to be the first reviewer. Oho! Now there's a challenge, especially seeing as I rarely have time to check my email at school. But I will do it... or bugger other people trying. This is my divine purpose, I just know it...
Be afraid. Be very afraid.
Author's Response: Leuky's back...back again...Leukhendian's back...tell a friend! :D
So now you're back from outerspace, lol, how the heck have you been? What have you been up to? Wowing audiences with your comedic brilliance in plays? Impressing teachers with humorous essays?
Good on you, writing an original novel! Mine's in the planning stage, since I read that writers who don't outline get stuck or worse--end up scrapping chapters or rewriting extensively!
More Than a Feeling won the Quicksilver Quill for Best Marauder Era Fiction, so new readers have been enjoying your reviews. ^_~
I'm all for you tying up the computer to read and review. Let other people wait. You have a higher purpose!
I'll be happy, very happy. :)
ps, I'm not into doomy. I prefer angry and ready to do something about it!
i feel so bad for the two of them. they both have good intentions, but their methods always seem to clash.
Author's Response: Couples who are just alike are a little scary to me, lol. Differences make romance exciting, even though it can also be frustrating. :D
Awwww! Poor Tonks. I hope her plan works at least.
Author's Response: Dix won't be able to use blood magic, that part will work. It's the other that's up in the air!
Author's Response: Thank you! Their romance isn't a simple one, but it's worth the pain and angst!