Reviews For Through My Eyes
Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 08/15/08 16:14
Chapter: Through My Eyes

I long for you to
talk to me, to hear your heart
shining through your voice.

^^Definitely my favorite line.

Never have I seen
something, so beautiful or
perfect, through my eyes.

^^I lied. These two tie.

Great job! It's definitely a great poem, and I really think it captures James's feelings perfectly. {BeCcA}

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 07/14/07 9:33
Chapter: Through My Eyes

Wow, this must have been *hard* to do all those haikus (that's what they are, right...?)! Great job, they're amazing. *loves* I absolutely love the ending - the last stanza or so was amazing. Keep writing poetry, you have a ton of talent!

Kate

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I usually don't write poetry. I thought I would try it and I ended up really happy with the end result so I might write more. It was really hard to write all the haikus. ~GinnyFairy

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 07/12/07 22:34
Chapter: Through My Eyes

AAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, tHAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET. A job well done.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thank You very much I apriciate the review. ~GinnyFairy

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