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Name: Gonz (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 21:51 · For: Chapter 1
What attracted me to this story was the poem; it is one of my absolute favorites. Frost just has a way with words, but so do you. I have to say your imagery is amazing. The first three paragraphs were beautiful.

What really touches me with this story is the message at the end. You take the message in the poem and have it go both ways, which is always a good reminder for us all. Good things will fade, but so will the bad. A great message of hope.

I'm sorry I don't have anything to critic, but was truly a touching story.


Author's Response: **huggles** Thank you! I love Frost's poem as well (obviously) and I get really excited whenever I see it anywhere. ~Evie


Name: LoopyLoonyLuna (Signed) · Date: 08/21/07 16:09 · For: Chapter 1
I know you don't want to hear this, but I love it. You are a really great descriptive writer, and I could visualize the scenes, especially in the beginning really well. Your vocabulary is one of your strengths, it really adds power to your story when you use longer words (ex. instead of saying "she walked" you said "her bare feet padded". It was a great fic though, to say the least...

~Casey

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D ~Evie


Name: Ginny_Luvs_Malfoy (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 15:32 · For: Chapter 1
beautiful, very sad but beautiful


Author's Response: thnx


Name: superswiftquidditich (Signed) · Date: 07/25/07 18:35 · For: Chapter 1
It's a beautiful story. You're right the poem is beautiful. You described the scene so well. I'd love to read more from you.


Author's Response: Thank you! Then read more! I have more stories in my authors page! :D ~Evie


Name: lily_potter13 (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 14:30 · For: Chapter 1
that was so sad but i like the poem i cant right poetry either but it was good

Author's Response: I didn't write that poem, remember. If I'd tried, it wouldn't have got accepted! Glad you liked it! ~Evie


Name: lost_in_fantasy (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 11:01 · For: Chapter 1
your descriptions were beautiful, and the whole thing was just wonderfully written, i also love that poem!

Author's Response: **huggles** :D ~Evie


Name: ginevraharryjames (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 6:40 · For: Chapter 1
owwww!!!!gosh!!!your descriptions are very...very very!!!deep...but still you could understand it...i was about to cry...then it finished!!!awwwww...its a sad fic..but you'll be satisfied..after reading it..!!!excellent job!!exceeds expectations!,,,outstanding!

Author's Response: WHEEEEEEEE! Thank you! ~Evie


Name: junior_achievement (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 19:48 · For: Chapter 1
oh that was lovely! your descriptions were breathtaking. it was just amazing.

beautiful job!

Author's Response: thank you... again. :p ~Evie


Name: junior_achievement (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 19:47 · For: Chapter 1
oh that was lovely! your descriptions were breathtaking. it was just amazing.

beautiful job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D


Name: orange_crusher (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 18:30 · For: Chapter 1
Love the poem...and the story

Author's Response: good.


Name: baby b (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 17:09 · For: Chapter 1
i really really loved it your such a talented wrter i look forward to reading more of your fabulous fics xXxBabyBxXx

Author's Response: thank you! I have five others and more coming! :D ~Evie


Name: HarryPotterLover_01 (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 15:42 · For: Chapter 1
you are an amazing writer! this was very beautiful. it really was the imagery was very storng and i felt like i could reach out and touch it. i didnt realize he was dead until the end when u said he was i thought tha this was the day after he had broken upwith her. but yeah i am crazy i will go back and read it again. the story really was beautiful. you protrayed her sadness extremely well and you incoperateed every detail of the grounds i really enjoyed this and yes i have to say i loved it! i look forward toreading other works by you in the future!
Charlene

Author's Response: SQUEE! :D lol, I suppose it could be the day he broke up with her... ~Evie


Name: Katie616 (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 13:19 · For: Chapter 1
I really loved it, although I'm not supposed to write that. I really loved all the descriptive words, and the soft, gentle, (how should I say this...) sway of the words. It was Ginny, right? I like the part in the middle where they kiss. That has a very sad, lonesome quality to it. Very good. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it (even though I know that sounds SO cheesy), because I felt really at peace when I read about the lake, and the colors. The picture you put in my mind is just so beautiful. I'm sure it'll stay with me for a long, long time. Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us. It was wonderful!

Author's Response: aw, thanks! Yes, it was Ginny. ;) ~Evie


Name: Ron x Hermione (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 13:17 · For: Chapter 1
Aw, this was terribly sad but extremely well written. I absolutely adore the poem you used--- I first heard it when I had to recite it for a class, then in the movie 'The Outsiders' if you've seen it. ;) Anyhow, this was very brilliant--- I really liked it, and the pairing of the poem with it was a nice choice.

~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: I actually got it from the book the outsiders, and I watched the film after I wrote it. I don't like how he reads it in the film, though. He has breakes in all the wrong places, IMO. Anyways, I'm so glad you liked it! ::D ~Evie


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