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Name: superswiftquidditich (Signed) · Date: 07/25/07 18:35 · For: Chapter 1
It's a beautiful story. You're right the poem is beautiful. You described the scene so well. I'd love to read more from you.

Author's Response: Thank you! Then read more! I have more stories in my authors page! :D ~Evie

Name: lily_potter13 (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 14:30 · For: Chapter 1
that was so sad but i like the poem i cant right poetry either but it was good

Author's Response: I didn't write that poem, remember. If I'd tried, it wouldn't have got accepted! Glad you liked it! ~Evie

Name: lost_in_fantasy (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 11:01 · For: Chapter 1
your descriptions were beautiful, and the whole thing was just wonderfully written, i also love that poem!

Author's Response: **huggles** :D ~Evie

Name: ginevraharryjames (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 6:40 · For: Chapter 1
owwww!!!!gosh!!!your descriptions are very...very very!!!deep...but still you could understand it...i was about to cry...then it finished!!!awwwww...its a sad fic..but you'll be satisfied..after reading it..!!!excellent job!!exceeds expectations!,,,outstanding!

Author's Response: WHEEEEEEEE! Thank you! ~Evie

Name: junior_achievement (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 19:48 · For: Chapter 1
oh that was lovely! your descriptions were breathtaking. it was just amazing.

beautiful job!

Author's Response: thank you... again. :p ~Evie

Name: junior_achievement (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 19:47 · For: Chapter 1
oh that was lovely! your descriptions were breathtaking. it was just amazing.

beautiful job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Name: orange_crusher (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 18:30 · For: Chapter 1
Love the poem...and the story

Author's Response: good.

Name: baby b (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 17:09 · For: Chapter 1
i really really loved it your such a talented wrter i look forward to reading more of your fabulous fics xXxBabyBxXx

Author's Response: thank you! I have five others and more coming! :D ~Evie

Name: HarryPotterLover_01 (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 15:42 · For: Chapter 1
you are an amazing writer! this was very beautiful. it really was the imagery was very storng and i felt like i could reach out and touch it. i didnt realize he was dead until the end when u said he was i thought tha this was the day after he had broken upwith her. but yeah i am crazy i will go back and read it again. the story really was beautiful. you protrayed her sadness extremely well and you incoperateed every detail of the grounds i really enjoyed this and yes i have to say i loved it! i look forward toreading other works by you in the future!

Author's Response: SQUEE! :D lol, I suppose it could be the day he broke up with her... ~Evie

Name: Katie616 (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 13:19 · For: Chapter 1
I really loved it, although I'm not supposed to write that. I really loved all the descriptive words, and the soft, gentle, (how should I say this...) sway of the words. It was Ginny, right? I like the part in the middle where they kiss. That has a very sad, lonesome quality to it. Very good. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it (even though I know that sounds SO cheesy), because I felt really at peace when I read about the lake, and the colors. The picture you put in my mind is just so beautiful. I'm sure it'll stay with me for a long, long time. Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us. It was wonderful!

Author's Response: aw, thanks! Yes, it was Ginny. ;) ~Evie

Name: Ron x Hermione (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 13:17 · For: Chapter 1
Aw, this was terribly sad but extremely well written. I absolutely adore the poem you used--- I first heard it when I had to recite it for a class, then in the movie 'The Outsiders' if you've seen it. ;) Anyhow, this was very brilliant--- I really liked it, and the pairing of the poem with it was a nice choice.

~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: I actually got it from the book the outsiders, and I watched the film after I wrote it. I don't like how he reads it in the film, though. He has breakes in all the wrong places, IMO. Anyways, I'm so glad you liked it! ::D ~Evie

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