Reviewer: Hallowthorn
Date: 03/16/15 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Whoa!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/25/08 16:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the way you separated the prophecy. And it was really well written, Harry's remembering what people have told him, especially Dumbledore. Repeating the question he asked Dubledore until he knew he was the horcrux was perfect, thats often how things come to us. Ron suggesting social services should shut the orphanage down was so Ron, hope they send an anonymous note to social services. I like the spell that reveals magic too. Oh, and Harry's wondering why the gates hadn't filtered tom Riddle out was a nice touch. I really don't think he'd have asked Ron to kill him though, especially since killing splits the soul. I thought he'd leave them instructions to destroy Voldemort, finally mortal, while he went off and either killed himself or got in a losing battle with a couple of death eaters. Also, this implies that Voldemort knew Harry to be the last Horcrux, which doesn't fit with his rebounding killing curse and frequent attempts to kill Harry at Hogwarts. So, it follows that Harry must have been an accidental Horcrux, in which case Voldemort will have made another to make up the seven, not knowing of horcrux harry's existance, or he intended makeing a horcrux from Harry's death and the rebounding killing curse altered the path of his stray soul fragment and he assumed it had worked. Sorry, I'm getting way too deep. All in all a great fic, I just like picking up on discrepancies.

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 07/10/07 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow... i just love it. i hope the real story never ends like this, but i certainly love the way you describe the feeling of missing out something. i think many people are able to associate with that feeling.

very well expressed. keep writing

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 07/09/07 17:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was good

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/09/07 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

i meant i really like it not lied it

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/09/07 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow i really lied
gud job
i really lied how dere was parts from da book n daending when harry says ron i want you to kill me
i luved it

Reviewer: savannah_smiles
Date: 07/09/07 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. that was really good. i really liked how you put the excerpts from the book in there.
great job!!

Reviewer: savannah_smiles
Date: 07/09/07 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. that was really good. i really liked how you put the excerpts from the book in there.
great job!!

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