Reviews For Midnight
Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 05/03/09 22:29
Chapter: One-Shot.

I love fluffy fics. I was in the mood for one and that's exactly what I got! Xp

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 05/03/09 22:26
Chapter: One-Shot.

I love fluffy fics. I was in the mood for one and that's exactly what I got! Xp

Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 04/12/09 2:27
Chapter: One-Shot.

Wow! I really liked this one and now I'm beginning to fall head-over-heels for this pairing!!!!! *swears*

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 01/28/08 18:52
Chapter: One-Shot.

Aww. What an adorable ending. The whole thing just had such a soft feel to it...I don't know exactly how to describe it, but it's a great feeling!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 12/29/07 21:33
Chapter: One-Shot.

Very cute!

Reviewer: Magggs
Date: 12/10/07 19:40
Chapter: One-Shot.

cute! loooved it!

Reviewer: Traiana
Date: 11/02/07 6:08
Chapter: One-Shot.

*loved it*
I seriously could read thousands of fluffy R/S stories :)
your FFs just make me smile
(excuse my bad english, i'm from germany so don't wonder if i write something that doesn't make sense ^^)
[was that gramatically correct??]

Author's Response: You're from Germany? Cool! I always wanted to live there. But yeah, it was gramatically correct =) I wouldn't have been able to tell that English wasn't your first language if I didn't know; it's very good. And thanks! :D I'm glad you like my fics, I should have another R/S one up soon.

Reviewer: Traiana
Date: 11/02/07 6:07
Chapter: One-Shot.

*loved it*
I seriously could read thousands of fluffy R/S stories :)
your FFs just make me smile
(excuse my bad english, i'm from germany so don't wonder if i write something that doesn't make sense ^^)
[was that gramatically correct??]

Reviewer: BlackClaude
Date: 10/28/07 15:46
Chapter: One-Shot.

Aww, this is really sweet. While the ending declarations aren't quite realistic for two teenaged, closeted boys, it works as a nice, fluffy romance. I liked the parts where they teased each other the best. "And I suppose the sky is quite seductive" was a good Remus line; I could picture him saying it in that wry way of his. And I loved "Eww. Dog breath," and the following barbs back and forth. I think that's the most realistic way that they would open up to each other, teasing the other about being gay and watching for the reaction. That's why the jump to telling each other how special they were reaches a bit, since they're still in that teasing phase. Just a few nitpicks: wristwatches can't beep in Hogwarts. :) Also, (that looked quite relevant to a journal) I don't think relevant is the word you want; I think "similar" would be closer in meaning. And It was nice to spend time with your best friend on a night like this To keep it in line with the rest of the paragraph, "your" should be "his." I liked this story a lot and look forward to more Remus/Sirius from you. Just watch how quickly they open up to each other, and I think you'll be great.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! :] I'm really grateful you took the time to help me out. I'll certainly make all the changes, they make sense, and haha I realized that the watches wouldn't beep in Hogwarts after I wrote this... but I mean, if they can have watches... Hm. Anyway, thanks again :D I hope you like my next R/S story too.

Reviewer: Holly Ashes
Date: 10/27/07 2:06
Chapter: One-Shot.

That was soooo sweet!! I can't stop myself from saying aww :) Very well written and really adorable. I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :D I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 08/23/07 1:04
Chapter: One-Shot.

cute

Author's Response: thanks =]

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 08/23/07 1:04
Chapter: One-Shot.

cute

Reviewer: pavartipatil
Date: 08/15/07 15:29
Chapter: One-Shot.

ohhhhhhhhh how sweet!exelent writing really!

Author's Response: thanks :] i'm glad you think so. thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: fergiefan
Date: 08/05/07 21:42
Chapter: One-Shot.

great fic

Author's Response: thanks for reading =]

Reviewer: j_sweethrt809
Date: 08/02/07 2:31
Chapter: One-Shot.

awww, that was really cute! great job, you're good at writing short, sweet, fluffy little pieces like this! i hope you write more in the future, you're got a real knack at it and you're, of course, a brilliant author. great job!! :):):):):)
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I now officially love hearing from you. Haha thanks so much! I'm glad people like you comment, it really keeps me writing. I just submitted a Harry/Draco fiction, so I hope you like it too :D

Reviewer: accio_harry
Date: 07/27/07 14:44
Chapter: One-Shot.

Aww I love it. I'm not usually a big fan of S/R but this was just so sweet! I love thne teasing in the broom cupboard "You homosexual werewolf!" That one really made me laugh!

Well done!

Author's Response: haha thanks =] I'm glad you read it even though you don't normally like the couple; I really enjoyed writing this, so thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: angeladeda
Date: 07/25/07 18:48
Chapter: One-Shot.

How sweet! I loved it. I like your writing too; it's very eloquent and descriptive. Fantastic job!

Author's Response: thanks for reading it! =]

Reviewer: Furry Little Problem
Date: 07/25/07 5:41
Chapter: One-Shot.

Aaaw, that was so sweet! The confusion over the favorite star/werewolf was so cute, lol. *hugs* good work! *runs off to read you other fic*...

Author's Response: Aww thanks =] really, thanks so much, it means a lot. I love your fanfics too, I know mine probably aren't even half of half...half as good as yours! haha, i wish i could write like you. thanks =]

Reviewer: siriusly_blackxx
Date: 07/24/07 15:11
Chapter: One-Shot.

hehe cute story!

Author's Response: thanks for reading it =]

Reviewer: madame moony 13
Date: 07/15/07 12:56
Chapter: One-Shot.

that was really sweet. bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! =]

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