Reviews For All The King's Men
Reviewer: ceres51892
Date: 10/11/09 1:07
Chapter: For The Innocent

That's so sad! Are you telling me Dumbledore is evil or something??

Sevvy and Remy... Hmm. It's so sad. They should be together.

But this was very good! I love your style and the way you wrote it. It's excellent, I think. Great job!


Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 12/09/07 9:46
Chapter: For The Innocent

I think it was pretty damn good! Oh yeah, and finalrider, WE ALL KNOW THAT THIS IS A FANFICTION RIGHT?od created Adam and Eve, but people can still change it to Adam and Steve if they want to.

Reviewer: disguisedangel
Date: 11/04/07 14:42
Chapter: For The Innocent

it is a beautiful story despite the 'slash' stuff the idea & the emotions are beautifully expressed. keep writing

Reviewer: ShotaandRemus4eva
Date: 09/25/07 12:32
Chapter: For The Innocent

It was pretty good, a lil confusing, but still pretty good. Usually I'm not that into Remus/Snape slash, but I liked this one. Good job!

Reviewer: the cold princess
Date: 09/21/07 13:01
Chapter: For The Innocent


Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 08/18/07 18:07
Chapter: For The Innocent

Great job! I liked the twist of Dumbledore not being what everyone thought he was.
Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Raven Veile
Date: 08/13/07 18:29
Chapter: For The Innocent

it was a little hard to understand who all you were talking about but it was good

Reviewer: sakina
Date: 07/27/07 1:48
Chapter: For The Innocent

fucking sexy!

Reviewer: galileogurl
Date: 07/26/07 22:37
Chapter: For The Innocent

another great one!
different writing style, very angsty and in the present tense, but I like

Reviewer: thefinalrider
Date: 07/25/07 23:17
Chapter: For The Innocent

I think the word to describe this stroy and all other slash stories period is: GARBAGE!! It is completly against nature and is quite frankly disgusting. It goes against what God intended in every way! God created Adam and Eve, not Adam and Steve

Reviewer: oddmentandtweak
Date: 07/07/07 23:54
Chapter: For The Innocent

Woooaahh. Very good! Really like the present tense, puts the story in a whole other element. Can't wait for your next one!

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