That's so sad! Are you telling me Dumbledore is evil or something??
Sevvy and Remy... Hmm. It's so sad. They should be together.
But this was very good! I love your style and the way you wrote it. It's excellent, I think. Great job!
I think it was pretty damn good! Oh yeah, and finalrider, WE ALL KNOW THAT THIS IS A FANFICTION RIGHT?od created Adam and Eve, but people can still change it to Adam and Steve if they want to.
it is a beautiful story despite the 'slash' stuff the idea & the emotions are beautifully expressed. keep writing
It was pretty good, a lil confusing, but still pretty good. Usually I'm not that into Remus/Snape slash, but I liked this one. Good job!
Great job! I liked the twist of Dumbledore not being what everyone thought he was.
Keep up the good work!
it was a little hard to understand who all you were talking about but it was good
another great one!
different writing style, very angsty and in the present tense, but I like
I think the word to describe this stroy and all other slash stories period is: GARBAGE!! It is completly against nature and is quite frankly disgusting. It goes against what God intended in every way! God created Adam and Eve, not Adam and Steve
Woooaahh. Very good! Really like the present tense, puts the story in a whole other element. Can't wait for your next one!