nice one shot! wouldn't have thought lily would kissed him, when she said Annoying, :P so uncalled for. maybe you should've specified how she grabbed it. like grabbed it, pulled his face down so that it leveled with hers or something. maybe tip toe kiss. so romantic... *giggles* okay, won't say any more things, may make you guys puke with my corniess. thinks it's a worth-to-be-read one shot fanfic!
Author's Response: Damn! I just wrote a long reply to this and the site made me log in again ... oh well. Thanks anyway! While I was writing this I was thinking that Lily was sick of pretending not to love James and his annoyingness, so she just gave up and kissed him.
So amazingly fluffy!!! I love fluffy fics about James/Lily, and this one was great. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love fluff too. It's gotta be the greatest invention ever.
AAWW!! its so sweet. I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wow, this was a great story! Sweet, corny, unoriginal, fluffy, and I LOVE IT!
After a hard day, or reading angsty stories or stories that aren't finished, you really need something like this. This would be a tricky story as a plot, and you did it justice! I know, I know. Tricky? How? Sometimes it's hard not to make something like this sound too familiar, as if the reader has read it before. But it was fabulously written; you made it your own. Congratulations!
Author's Response: Wow! What a great review! I did realise that this might be a bit difficult to write without making it seem too overdone. I'm glad you think it didn't sound too familiar. Thanks!
Amazing story! It was so cute! I hope
you write more stories like this - they're
great! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! By the way, I have another one-shot written about Sirius - a bit different though - that I'm just waiting to get back from my beta-reader. Thanks for reviewing!
VERY NICE! Though, I think it could be fluffy-er! *wink wink*
Author's Response: There's no such thing as too much fluff! Thanks for reviewing!
Ahhh, corninesss. You've gotta love it. In a way, that is just really sweet. This chapter was just so fluffy in a really cute way. So, any ideas for the future?
Author's Response: Thanks! This is just a one-shot though, sorry.
Awe, sweet! i like the 'Be my Valentine' thing and how Lily reacted to it! "It was corny. It was overdone. It was so totally unoriginal; Lily couldn’t help but kiss him again." made me laugh a little.
‘Didn’t you see the notice board? Flitwick and McGonagall have changed their class times today, because Flitwick was sick this morning.’ i have a question about this. if Flitwick was sick, then wouldn't they have Transfiguration? yeah, that was a bit weird. nice story! i really like it! sweet, cute, and funny! :D :P
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I changed it a little, so hopefully it makes more sense now! When I read through it I didn’t really understand where I was going with that. Thanks for reviewing!
corny? hmm... i ABSOLUTELY loved it. keep it up.
actually the thing is the bigger jerk James tries to be, the more we like him.
a job well done
Author's Response: What a nice review! I know it's corny. I love corny-ness. (I was going to say corn, but that just sounds weird). I think if James wasn't a jerk, no one would love him anymore. Thanks for reviewing!
Woo Hoo! Ur 1st fan fic! That's a great bit of fluff u got there! Congrats! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Chloe. At least you didn't abuse me!
Hi Jenny b ! Awsome story! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Romantic and funny!
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Funny and prefectly cute! ~MJ
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
ok....umm....i didnt really get the last part....sorry!But the story was very interesting?!
Author's Response: If you explain more on what bit you didn't get, I'll be happy to explain it for you. Thanks for reviewing!
whoooo! Nice one!
Author's Response: Thanks!
