Reviews For Angel
Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 07/26/07 23:18
Chapter: May You Find Some Comfort Here

i cried..this is the first time i cried while reading a fanfic....i love you story just absolutely adore it! its going to my favorites..

Reviewer: fillibuster_firework
Date: 07/26/07 16:04
Chapter: May You Find Some Comfort Here

I just finished the whole story and I have to say it was so awesome! I loved it! It was very good, and you did a great job or portraying all of the characters. I especially liked the ending!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 07/26/07 15:22
Chapter: May You Find Some Comfort Here

I loved this story! Especially this:
"When the time came for the reception to end, Remus (who was the only one sober enough to hold the camera still) was talking to Sirius and James.

Out of the blue, Sirius put his arm around James and slurred, “Now, you guys are going to be doing something tonight that I’m not going to mention for the kids at home-”

Hastily, Remus turned the camera onto Lily. “Sirius has had a little too much to drink,” he explained. "
I liked how Harry got a chance to see his parents, and Sirius with a video camera: priceless.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 07/26/07 15:12
Chapter: Rosie

I loved it!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 07/26/07 14:43
Chapter: May You Find Some Comfort Here

Hmmm, a video camera and a drunk Sirius...ingenious.

Reviewer: Phia Phoenix
Date: 07/26/07 4:22
Chapter: Weddings and All That Fun Stuff

Bee-autiful. Best fictional wedding I've ever been to (cos that's what it felt like).
I really liked that you fitted in both the humour at the start and the romance at the (duh) wedding!
Did you write this before or after DH? I don't know if I can say more than that without this being a spoiler, it was just the mention of Petunia that made me wonder...
My only criticism was that it wasn't long enough. Can't wait til the next installment!

Author's Response: After DH, actually. I hope the next one's long enough, and I'm glad you liked it! --Hanni

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 07/23/07 18:34
Chapter: Weddings and All That Fun Stuff

Sweet! Absolutely adorable! I would have loved to have seen Rosie as a flower girl or something though, she was so sweet! And very believable too; I find it difficult to write young children, and you did it exceedingly well. Lily and James were great too; very much themselves, but not overly cliched. Lovely!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 07/23/07 9:51
Chapter: Weddings and All That Fun Stuff

Good bunny-fluff. I like it!

Reviewer: Phia Phoenix
Date: 07/14/07 1:52
Chapter: Rosie

I love it!
It's a very happy, light, funny fic! Your characterisation is perfect, especially James. The way both Lily and James treat the toddler and each other is also exactly as would happen in "real life". I also loved how you managed to Rose the catalyst for the whole thing.
Basically, despite of the hinted tragedy at the start, this short story is and sweet and just exudes... how can I say it... innocence! The little girl's innocence, of course, but also innocence from James, and the innocence of two young people in love.
Basically, this is far and away the best J/L fic I've read yet! I am definitely adding it to my fave stories!

Reviewer: Enchantment
Date: 07/12/07 12:53
Chapter: Rosie

This is so adorable. I can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 07/11/07 10:27
Chapter: Rosie

By the way...Happy Birthday! *big grin*

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 07/11/07 10:24
Chapter: Rosie

AWWWWW!!!!! I love it! It's so different and sweet! I hope you have the next chapter ready! Or, kidding....Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: snowfairy11730
Date: 07/11/07 9:55
Chapter: Rosie

i love it. get the next chapter up soon

Reviewer: snowfairy11730
Date: 07/11/07 9:54
Chapter: Rosie

i love it. get the next chapter up soon

Reviewer: hermioneluvsronald
Date: 07/11/07 8:15
Chapter: Rosie

This is a good story! I enjoyed it! Where did you get the idea and how many other chapters are there going to be?

Author's Response: I got the idea from babysitting a three-year-old with a friend of mine. *grins* I have all the chapters written, and they will be up ASAP. --Hanni

Author's Response: I got the idea from babysitting a three-year-old with a friend of mine. *grins* I have all the chapters written, and they will be up ASAP. --Hanni

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 07/10/07 22:51
Chapter: Rosie

Awww cuteness. You described how a three year old acts perfectly. I can't wait for the rest! :]

Author's Response: Thanks!

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