Reviewer: Red Vines
Date: 06/25/12 2:48
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

It was really good! The last chapter made me cry, I was SO mad at Brett and sad about Emma. I loved it! Hated Brett at the end but, loved the story... I kept hoping Brett's behavior was some strange misunderstanding. But alas, it was not in the stars :p....... Well, I'm off to read the one shots :)

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 04/01/08 16:30
Chapter: A Love Left in the Dust

Thank you so very much! LOL, I'm glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: :$

Reviewer: xohplovr94xo
Date: 03/31/08 13:17
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

Holy Jesus Christ!!! i hate you brett you can go die!!! please make an epiloge..........something about brett....you're such a good author!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 11/15/07 13:22
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

OMG that was an amazing story. Your writing is spectacular. I was shocked when Brett turned out to be evil, even when I realized he was I kepst waiting for him to redeem himself, I guess Emma died instead(big shock). Anyway it was a great story.

PS I really like your other story the unexplained files, wish you would start updating again.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of the lovely compliments. I really appreciate them, and I really loved writing this story.

Reviewer: Fred the Duck
Date: 10/07/07 12:07
Chapter: The Weighing of a Relationship

this is a wonderful story! one of your best! but you might ant to check over it, you contradict yourself quite a few times.

Author's Response: Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 08/12/07 17:48
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

Lindsey! *sobs*


I'm absolutely horrified about Brett. At first, when I started reading this story, I adored him with all my heart and wished there was a boy like him in my town. But then...*BAM* I was consumed by hate for him, the lowly peice of scum...*goes on, getting carried away*


It was a really fabulous story though, and I hope your entry does well. I was going to try my hand at this challenge, but then really started focusing on Lovers in the Moonlight, so I just skipped it. I'm also reading Fire and Ice, Merlynne's entry. I can't wait for the results! You'll have to tell me how you place. =]


Once again, I loved this story, even though the ending was heart-wrenching, and am awaiting the alt. ending! Great job! -Ashley

Author's Response: AW, once again Ashley, you amaze me how you find the time the time to read MY stories, of all of the amazing authors on here. I really appreciate it--- (and I really wish there was a Brett before chapter seven in my town, too). I tried to make him a perfect guy of my tastes, lol. I guess we have the same liking for guys! *hugs* Thanks again! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: hailtotheholly123
Date: 08/06/07 20:42
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

-gaspeth-

I can't believe the ending! I'd never have expected Brett to turn so...evil! And Emma, I can't believe she died because of Brett!

Anyway, I absolutely loved reading this fic!!! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 08/05/07 18:32
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

I can't believe it!!! I HATE Brett!!! I can't believe he was changed so evilly! I hope he gets what he deserves, I'm also glad someone else knows the truth. That was just horrible, I'm speechless!!!

*sobs, majorly out of anger and sadness*
~Lexi~

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Lexi! I used to remember when you loved Brett . . . *sobs* *giggles* Thanks so much for giving me all these reviews and sharing your reactions with me, Lexi! I really love them all. *hugs* ~Lindsey :)

Author's Response: Oh, and also, you said in your last review that you wanted to know more about the key--- well, I don't remember if I ever explained it fully, but Brett got to Eva so she would steal the key from under Emma's pillow--- because we know that the boys can't go into the dormitories of the girls, so he used her to get to Emma. Anyhow. *hugs Lexi again and runs* ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Ravenlily
Date: 08/03/07 23:09
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

I hope you have an epilogue soon!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's in the works! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: SoccerHobb
Date: 08/03/07 23:03
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

*sobs and sobs and sobs some more*
Lindsey, I really was terrified of what I would read in this final chapter.....boy was I right to feel that way. Well, you pretty much broke my heart! I've never read anything so deeply sad! I just want to wish you luck with this, and tell you that you did a fabulous job, and I can't wait to see what happens in that alternate ending...*winks*

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Kate. I knew that you would be sad while you read this, and I did kind of make it horrible, so yeah. *hugs again* I'm so glad you helped me with this story all those times and kept on reading it for me! And I'm working on the alt. ending now, actually, I've just hit a block . . . I'm going to wait, I think, until the end of the challenge and the results to add the ending though, because I'm not as proud of it as I am the other chapters and want to wait to see what the results of the actual competition are before I add it. Thanks, Kate! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: SoccerHobb
Date: 08/03/07 21:30
Chapter: Revolting Images and Wallowing Days

nooooo Lindsey! How could you do that to poor, poor Emma? Gosh, I never expected anything that horrific! Lol, well that being said I congratulate you on a great, but absolutely heartbreaking chapter!

-katie

Author's Response: *giggles* I'm so sorry, Kate! I dreaded wriing this because I knew you wouldn't like that I did that! *hugs* I'm glad you liked it! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 08/03/07 13:44
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

Wow..that totally shocked me. It was depressing, but it was a fairly good ending.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Thoughts on Magic
Date: 08/03/07 13:00
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

HEY! U can't do that...that's just not cool. You could have at least had Brett getting caught, killed, tortured...oops sorry went a little too far there. But seriously...that wasn't very nice thing to do.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry, Shane. I'm glad you liked it, though--- perhaps? And yes, it nearly killed me to write the part where Brett told Emma all of the things about how she had helped him--- I did actually do that, though, if you go back and look, where Emma was telling him those things and didn't even realise it. I am now starting the epilogue and got a word count of almost a hundred, lol, so I'm just getting started, but it's still in the works. I'm trying to decide on whether or not I should submit it aong with this story because of the contest, or just submit it as a one shot. I'll think on it. My thoughts right now I'm feeling for Brett and what to put him through in the epilogue . . . It's taking all of my brainpower not to write him into one of the Saw movies. But he does have something coming to him, no matter how bizarre it will be. :) AND BEWARE TO ALL TENNESSEE DRIVERS--- I got my permit this morning, so look out! Thanks so much Shane for putting up with all of my endless pleas for you to read this. *hugs* ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: diary_girl
Date: 08/03/07 9:45
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

Sniff! Ok so this is really amazing, and I love how you take the readers through loving Brett and then hating him with every ounce of our being. Very sad ending, and I am looking orward to the alternate ending (maybe a bit happier?)

Author's Response: Oh, yes, the alternate ending will be happier, because I don't know how it could be any worse than that. :) My friend Kate demands it as well, lol. *hugs* I'm so glad you liked it! ~Lindsey ;)

Reviewer: Ginny663
Date: 08/03/07 9:02
Chapter: Insanity Comes in All Forms

okay, im really sad now!! how could brett be like that???? i am ashamed at him!!! it was still a good story, but how could he just let her DIE?????
but overall, it was a great story. just brett turned out to be a first class ass. lol

!~Sophie~!

Author's Response: LOL, I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for all the reviews! And yes, I agree, Brett did turn out to be that. If not worse. ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Thoughts on Magic
Date: 08/02/07 10:43
Chapter: Revolting Images and Wallowing Days

AHHHH! ok there we go...I was wondering when Brett would join the rest of us guys who really don't care about 'love'

Author's Response: Ha ha, well, we know that there are a lot of those, especially in our school, eh? Well, Brett didn't necesarilly not care about love, he just. . . *shuts up* Thanks for the review, Shane! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 08/02/07 9:00
Chapter: Revolting Images and Wallowing Days

LINDSEY, HOW COULD YOU!!! I can't believe you did that!!! Brett and Emma are suppose to be together!!! Eva is such a witch (and not in the good way!) It was suppose to be only a dream!!!! I want to know more about the stolen key as well!!! I hope Eva DIES!

*sobbs*
~Lexi~

Author's Response: Aw, Lexi, I'm SO sorry! *hugs and comforts* I just added the last chapter, which I had problems submitting because it went over the word count, amazingly, lol, so yeah. I'm terribly sorry, Lexi. And I promise that Eva gets her payback, well, kind of, and the key comes into play in the last chapter. But that's all I can say. I'm proud of the last chap, though, and I hope you'll like it. Um, I don't know if like is the correct word, but yeah. :) *hugs again* ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 08/02/07 6:30
Chapter: Revolting Images and Wallowing Days

Oh my gosh! At first I thought that maybe Seth was taking Polyjuice Potion, but now...I don't know. Imperius perhaps? I can't wait for the story to continue!

Author's Response: Thanks so very much! It'll be added probably today! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 08/02/07 5:31
Chapter: Revolting Images and Wallowing Days

I keep hopinh it's Polyjuice!

Author's Response: *laughs maniacally* LOL, aw! I'm so sorry I did that. Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 08/01/07 12:42
Chapter: Pieces of Parchment, Brilliant Recollections, and Second Tasks

Nice chapter!!! I'm glad that Eva broke up with Seth! I thought it was cool that you included Fluffy. Great Work Lindsey!!!


~Lexi~

Author's Response: Thanks so much Lexi! I was afraid hat the people who read this story wouldn't like this chapter because I felt a bit iffy about it, but two people have told me they liked it, so I'm happy. Your reviews keep me going, dear! *huggles* Thanks! ~Lindsey :)

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