i love it plz update soon plz plz plz, im beging u plz lol...luv the story : )

i like the way is going :) no imma read the 2nd chapter

Very intriguing. I hope you continue soon.
Happy writing!

O, such a dramatic ending. I loved this chapter. It was the kind of chapter that gives us the important information needed to develope a wonderful plot.

Indeed, some may say it was uneventful, but I found it to be highly entertaining and thought provoking. It wasn't packed with action just for the sake of action.

You can see the characters developement, and how you have characterized them and morphed them with your own small characteristics and styles. Like Ron's jelously for example. I can see him as the jealous type yet you take him to another level that I can believe yet didn't see coming. Did any of that make sense? :)

Really great job. I can't wait till the next chapter.

update please!

arnt u going to update...): I loveeee it :)

Oh!!!! you have to keep going with this!!! I want to know what happens!!!

It's really good...

hey this same story is on harrypotterfanfiction.com

Awesome

that's ron for you, what a git! anyways, i like it so far and i hope you write more very soon! keep up the good work!