Please continue this story, I really want to know what happens next!
What is going on? It has been ages and you haven't updated! Like 5 months already! Come on! It started off so good and you're just going to abandon it?
This is realy good so far!!
I can't wait until you update, so please do it soon!!
i love it plz update soon plz plz plz, im beging u plz lol...luv the story : )
:) great chapter loved it
i like the way is going :) no imma read the 2nd chapter
please update soon..It's very good story.
I loved the II chapter most. God it was good :D
Very intriguing. I hope you continue soon.
AAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHH! finish it!!!!!!!!!!
O, such a dramatic ending. I loved this chapter. It was the kind of chapter that gives us the important information needed to develope a wonderful plot.
Indeed, some may say it was uneventful, but I found it to be highly entertaining and thought provoking. It wasn't packed with action just for the sake of action.
You can see the characters developement, and how you have characterized them and morphed them with your own small characteristics and styles. Like Ron's jelously for example. I can see him as the jealous type yet you take him to another level that I can believe yet didn't see coming. Did any of that make sense? :)
Really great job. I can't wait till the next chapter.
Aww... that isn't all of it... is it?? I'm depressed... THIS WAS GOOD!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
arnt u going to update...): I loveeee it :)
what?? what happened?? i want to see the rest......
Oh!!!! you have to keep going with this!!! I want to know what happens!!!
It's really good...
really good story!!!
i hope you continue writing it!!!
hey this same story is on harrypotterfanfiction.com