Reviews For Tease
Reviewer: mm24
Date: 09/04/07 17:42
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Great job! I love it! update soon! Thanx!

Reviewer: JamesPottersgirl
Date: 09/04/07 16:59
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

updated soon! i love this story!

Reviewer: dr324
Date: 09/02/07 7:55
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Update soon!

Reviewer: cutiexoxobhe
Date: 08/31/07 22:30
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

aww... so short.!
**i can't wait.!!! **

Reviewer: slyslytherin1314
Date: 08/30/07 22:57
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Oh my gosh!!!! please, please!! continue I am anxious to read on! :D

Reviewer: 0rchid
Date: 08/30/07 10:48
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

heehee, can't wait to see how this turns out!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/29/07 17:19
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Oh my God I cannot wait to see what happens next! Wow, Draco is being very chivalrous. It's kind of sweet, although a bit unnatural.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/29/07 17:04
Chapter: The Honors

Dah dah daaaah... intrigue. I'm so excited.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/29/07 16:22
Chapter: Just Another

I like it, but your bits in the beginning with you taking were kind of confusing. It's a good story though. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: num
Date: 08/29/07 7:17
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

I'm afraid the characterisation didn't really work for me in this chapter. Firstly, Dumbledore is such a commanding figure that I cannot imagine him not having the full attention of his audience (except perhaps Slytherins...) throughout his speach. I also felt the wording was out in his explanation for choosing Mayfoy. Rather than stating that Gryffindor and Slytherin have been enemies, he is more likely to draw our attention to interhouse unity etc. I also felt the final scene was totally out of character for all concerned; while Ron is often outraged a Hermione, he should know she had no influence on the decision.

I'm sorry this sounds horribly negative. I'm still enjoying your story very much, I just feel more careful characterisation would make it even better.

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 08/28/07 20:28
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

awww..how sweet but at the same time ron was mean.i thoroughly am enjoying this story! hurry and update

Reviewer: DracosPunkBabe
Date: 08/28/07 19:22
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

a little confusing that last part. but its good so far. now hopefully u'll updae soon. but yeah u should post this on Fanfiction.net so yeah HURRY PLZ,
Laterz

DracosPunkBabe

Muah!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 08/28/07 15:52
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Good chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: xxlightningboltxx
Date: 08/28/07 14:52
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Wow, addicted to another one of your stories as ever. Gosh, don't you just love this ship?! Update soon x)

Reviewer: keturah_ketchup
Date: 08/28/07 14:38
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Excellent beginning! Keep writing!

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 08/28/07 14:26
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Interesting reactions from Draco. I always like him portrayed as the protective sort. Don't keep us waiting too long, yeah?

Reviewer: FreddyMyLove
Date: 08/28/07 14:26
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Can't wait for the next update! I don't like this one very much..not much happened, I guess. lol Keep them coming!

Reviewer: FreddyMyLove
Date: 08/28/07 14:25
Chapter: A Feast Indeed

Can't wait for the next update! I don't like this one very much..not much happened, I guess. lol Keep them coming!

Reviewer: rafa gal
Date: 08/28/07 4:46
Chapter: The Honors

oh lovely story!
its awesome the different way u potrayed hermione!

Reviewer: FreddyMyLove
Date: 08/26/07 12:48
Chapter: The Honors

Could you please, PLEASE update??? I'm dying to read the next chapter!!! :]

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