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Name: mm24 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 17:42 · For: A Feast Indeed
Great job! I love it! update soon! Thanx!


Name: JamesPottersgirl (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 16:59 · For: A Feast Indeed
updated soon! i love this story!


Name: dr324 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/07 7:55 · For: A Feast Indeed
Update soon!


Name: cutiexoxobhe (Signed) · Date: 08/31/07 22:30 · For: A Feast Indeed
aww... so short.!
**i can't wait.!!! **


Name: slyslytherin1314 (Signed) · Date: 08/30/07 22:57 · For: A Feast Indeed
Oh my gosh!!!! please, please!! continue I am anxious to read on! :D


Name: 0rchid (Signed) · Date: 08/30/07 10:48 · For: A Feast Indeed
heehee, can't wait to see how this turns out!


Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 08/29/07 17:19 · For: A Feast Indeed
Oh my God I cannot wait to see what happens next! Wow, Draco is being very chivalrous. It's kind of sweet, although a bit unnatural.


Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 08/29/07 17:04 · For: The Honors
Dah dah daaaah... intrigue. I'm so excited.


Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 08/29/07 16:22 · For: Just Another
I like it, but your bits in the beginning with you taking were kind of confusing. It's a good story though. I can't wait to read the next chapter.


Name: num (Signed) · Date: 08/29/07 7:17 · For: A Feast Indeed
I'm afraid the characterisation didn't really work for me in this chapter. Firstly, Dumbledore is such a commanding figure that I cannot imagine him not having the full attention of his audience (except perhaps Slytherins...) throughout his speach. I also felt the wording was out in his explanation for choosing Mayfoy. Rather than stating that Gryffindor and Slytherin have been enemies, he is more likely to draw our attention to interhouse unity etc. I also felt the final scene was totally out of character for all concerned; while Ron is often outraged a Hermione, he should know she had no influence on the decision.

I'm sorry this sounds horribly negative. I'm still enjoying your story very much, I just feel more careful characterisation would make it even better.


Name: kittykat (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 20:28 · For: A Feast Indeed
awww..how sweet but at the same time ron was mean.i thoroughly am enjoying this story! hurry and update


Name: DracosPunkBabe (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 19:22 · For: A Feast Indeed
a little confusing that last part. but its good so far. now hopefully u'll updae soon. but yeah u should post this on Fanfiction.net so yeah HURRY PLZ,
Laterz

DracosPunkBabe

Muah!


Name: KneazleWeazl (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 15:52 · For: A Feast Indeed
Good chapter, can't wait for the next one.


Name: xxlightningboltxx (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 14:52 · For: A Feast Indeed
Wow, addicted to another one of your stories as ever. Gosh, don't you just love this ship?! Update soon x)


Name: keturah_ketchup (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 14:38 · For: A Feast Indeed
Excellent beginning! Keep writing!


Name: La_Rubinita (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 14:26 · For: A Feast Indeed
Interesting reactions from Draco. I always like him portrayed as the protective sort. Don't keep us waiting too long, yeah?


Name: FreddyMyLove (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 14:26 · For: A Feast Indeed
Can't wait for the next update! I don't like this one very much..not much happened, I guess. lol Keep them coming!


Name: FreddyMyLove (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 14:25 · For: A Feast Indeed
Can't wait for the next update! I don't like this one very much..not much happened, I guess. lol Keep them coming!


Name: rafa gal (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 4:46 · For: The Honors
oh lovely story!
its awesome the different way u potrayed hermione!


Name: FreddyMyLove (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 12:48 · For: The Honors
Could you please, PLEASE update??? I'm dying to read the next chapter!!! :]


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