Reviews For I Made Our Love
Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 09/17/07 19:36
Chapter: I Made Our Love

That. Was. GREAT!

Seriously. The ryhming is so genius - can I have some for my new chapter for my peom? Anyway, I think this is my favourite line:

I will mourn; my love's gone away;

I know despair won't go astray.

My concealed secret brought displease-

Iíve unearthed fallen reveries,


It's just so beautiful, even when it's 1/3 of the peom. *headdesk*

~ Leia


Author's Response: You wanna borrow my off the chain rhymes? Heck no, home g. *blame me listening to Kanye West at the moment*

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 07/05/07 22:00
Chapter: I Made Our Love

Very good, I thought you did very well.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 07/03/07 9:52
Chapter: I Made Our Love

That is really neat! I like the way you tied the refrain to the whole idea of using Amortentia, that was really clever and original. Nice job with the rhythm as well. Did you have a particular couple in mind? For some reason I think of Merope Gaunt, since it seems likely she did something to get Tom Riddle to love her. Good job!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Yes. :)

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