Reviews For A Day in the Sun
Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 09/15/07 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very clever. I loved it! It was a tad bit annoying that the beginning of every line was not always capitalized, but you get annoyed really easily about that stuff when you're an English nerd. Please keep writing. You're brilliant!

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 07/20/07 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh- my - gosh. This was brilliant! Very fun to read after all the serious and dark poems submitted regularily. Of course those aren't bad- serious poems are *awesome*. But this was just refreshing and funny. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! Maybe I'll write some more serious poems.

Reviewer: Horatiosgirl14
Date: 07/17/07 8:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol!!! thats really cool!

Author's Response: thanks! I love good reviews.

Reviewer: SlytherinBlood
Date: 07/11/07 11:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh hahaha. that was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanx a million!

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 07/06/07 1:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

haha, that was great. "voldie raisins" lmao.

Author's Response: Thanks, and the Voldie raisins are actually quite delicious.

Reviewer: T o n k s
Date: 07/03/07 10:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Haha, very funny :] I enjoyed it a lot and hope you write more soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks, and I will!

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 07/03/07 3:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

I never read poetry, but was in the 'Most Recent' and stumbled upon this. I'm very glad I did! This made me laugh, especially because I'm going to the beach tomorrow. Hehe, Voldie raisins. I thought it was very clever how you made it rhyme and managed to fit the stanzas together. Anyway, just thought I'd say thank you. This was a great poem, and very funny. :D

Hehe, not a drop of Coppertone. *laughs*

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Author's Response: p.s. I'm going to the beach tomorrow too.

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