Reviews For Polly
Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 07/11/07 12:33
Chapter: Come and knock on our door

i love the story! its sad but its so good at the same time.... i love how you added in the morning sickness... its a good reminder of whats really going on

Reviewer: Gueneviere
Date: 07/11/07 11:41
Chapter: Come and knock on our door

Oh my god. This is definetely new.

Reviewer: greennotebook
Date: 07/11/07 10:17
Chapter: Come and knock on our door

Hahaha.... I love the title for this chapter.

I started reading your story doubting that I'd enjoy it much. I'm not a big proponent of using marriage laws in these strories. They seem much too far-fetched. Then again, this is a sequel to a story where Hermione went back in time, fell in love with a man twice her age, who was dead in her time, but not really. So I think you can make it work. I'm certainly enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 07/11/07 9:36
Chapter: Come and knock on our door

You are possibly the meanest author ever to exist - or maybe not meanEST, considering JK Rowling has made it her business to kill off anyone who means anything to Harry - but you're definitely in the Mean-ness Top Ten. :) But that's a compliment.

Though Hermione and Sirius is not a ship that appeals to me – rather it’s sort of disturbing – you have done an excellent job with the story. Your writing technique is excellent, the story flows smoothly and I couldn’t stop myself from clicking the NEXT link until I had read all of four chapters. The cliffhangers are great and I can’t believe she had to marry Remus – poor both of them. How uncomfortable – even painful! Update soon!

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 07/11/07 9:23
Chapter: Come and knock on our door

OMGSH!!! i love this story! i feel really bad for Sirius and Hermione! i hope the law lifts, that really sucks that she has to be married to someone she doesn't love in that way, but at least it was someone loved as a friend. Wow, some awkward moments are ahead, i can just tell. keep up the good work! Update Soon!!!

Reviewer: saknicole
Date: 07/11/07 4:01
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

OMG I was SUPER excited to see there was a new chapter and dieing to see what happens, I can't wait!

Reviewer: Luciefer
Date: 07/11/07 2:31
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

woot you made a sequel! i think i love you o.O
like the twist, poor darlings ^^ hope you give them a happy end tho

Reviewer: chemically_used
Date: 07/10/07 22:48
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

This story is sooooooo good if you don't continue I will cut you!!! lol!

Reviewer: soso3333333333
Date: 07/09/07 16:35
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I bet she's wishing she rushed into marrige w/ Sirius NOW! I LUV your writing style, but now i'm depressed and there's got to be a happy ending sooner or later so PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE update quickly

Reviewer: buffy_lover
Date: 07/09/07 10:57
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

This story is so good. i am so glad you decided to write a sequel! I love it!

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 07/08/07 17:03
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

What a jerk! I'm guessing the marriage clerk has some connection with the Death Eaters. Well done.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 07/08/07 14:00
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

oh nausea. this is painful for me to read, not because your writing is bad (it isn't) but the situations you are forcing these poor people into is painful. its like me trying to be a contortionist, or having to watch an evil villain put your mother on the rack.

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 07/08/07 5:44
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

Fantastic chapter, interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 07/07/07 23:37
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

the poor thing! i couldnt imagine having a wedding like that... lupin will be good to her though...

Reviewer: MC Tria
Date: 07/07/07 2:12
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

please continue on this, i'm curious as to what happened to Hermoine, Remus, and Sirus

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 07/06/07 19:41
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

omgsh, this story is so great! i hate that Hermione couldn't marry Sirius, i mean siriusly :-). i hope remus doesn't try to do "anything" with Hermione. i hope that they'll be married, but Sirius and Hermione will still be together. Oh, i just love this story!

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 07/06/07 16:07
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin


Reviewer: siriusly_blackxx
Date: 07/06/07 14:58
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

ahhh oh no! at least she married Remus instead of going to azkaban. it will definately be interesting to see how this all works out!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 07/06/07 14:51
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin

Wow things are moving fast in this fan fic!
I feel so sorry for Sirius!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Cont soon!!

Reviewer: gymnasticsluver1
Date: 07/06/07 14:19
Chapter: Mr. and Mrs. Lupin


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