Reviews For Polly
Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 07/19/07 12:51
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Oh I absolutely LOVED this chapter! You've written everything fantastically! I feel so sorry for Sirius at the end! Hermione and Remus, they finally kissed. You wrote that scene so beautifully! I could feel the love and everything was fantastic! Great job! Please update as soon as everything opens back up!

Reviewer: dracowifey22
Date: 07/18/07 22:18
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

aww no poor sirius, i think he just might try and beat the heck out of remus for this, bad enough that he cant be the one married to Hermione AND he cant even stack claim to his own child, those arent his fault, but to walk in on this that just adds insult to injury right there i feel so back for him.

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/18/07 18:59
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

wow i luved it
especially da last line kissing her husband hahaha
dat was fantastic
just wondering y was lucius using telephone when he is a wizard?
especially when half of da wizards dunt even kno wat it is remember ron didnt kno abt telephone
oder den dat it was perfect gud job
update soon

Reviewer: JBeauD
Date: 07/18/07 17:51
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Well, didn't see that coming, but I should have. What a natural progression and poor, poor everbody.

(Would Clarence Beeks have anything to do with Eddie Murphy, Dan Ackroyd and a contraband orange juice report? :) )

Author's Response: LOL! 5 points!!!! I was wondering if anyone would catch it! ;)

Reviewer: ember
Date: 07/18/07 13:50
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Please please don't let hermione end up with Remus! You can't. I beg you!!!! This story was so good when hermione and sirius were together. They just have to be togother again!

Reviewer: ember
Date: 07/18/07 13:50
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Please please don't let hermione end up with Remus! You can't. I beg you!!!! This story was so good when hermione and sirius were together. They just have to be togother again!

Reviewer: ember
Date: 07/18/07 13:50
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Please please don't let hermione end up with Remus! You can't. I beg you!!!! This story was so good when hermione and sirius were together. They just have to be togother again!

Reviewer: Jennifer_Lynn_Black
Date: 07/18/07 13:38
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

love the chapter. poor sirius. :(. umm i guess Clarence Beeks was a character in a movie.

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 07/18/07 12:52
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

oh. my. good lord above! how on earth could you just end the chapter like that! this was insane--very well written but altogether too short! i enjoyed it very much nonetheless though, keep writing!

Reviewer: starfighterpilot
Date: 07/18/07 11:58
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Aaaah! That wasn't long enough! Now I'm intrigued.... :(

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 07/18/07 11:50
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

Oh god! poor Sirius!!!!!!!!!!!! Where did that kiss come from anyway?

Reviewer: gold
Date: 07/18/07 10:41
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

AHHHHH thats just mean poor Sirius
luv the story anyway update soon

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 07/18/07 10:27
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

i had a feeling that was going to happen sooner or later... I love your story!

And its almost saturday! woot! woot!

Reviewer: buffy_lover
Date: 07/18/07 9:43
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

This story is so sad, yet amazingly good. I love it!

Reviewer: mds_987
Date: 07/18/07 8:30
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

This story still surprises me! But siriusly, how could you do that to sirius?? It saddens me :-(. The story is still amazing though :-)

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 07/18/07 8:18
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! I LOVED IT! What a great chapter! Hermione kissing Remus and Sirius chatches them! Oh just wonderful! Is Sirius going to hex Remus?! ^-^ Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: rosie mari potter
Date: 07/18/07 7:52
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

OMG why did you have to do that!!!!???
....i hate you lol no jk. but why?! bad Hermione and very bad Remus for kissing her. oh poor Sirius. probably heart broken. okay update soon.

Reviewer: alinepotter
Date: 07/18/07 7:45
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats one heck fo an ending, cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 07/18/07 7:01
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

What an evil cliffie! I will wait for the next post with almost as much anxiety and I await a certain book that will be released this Saturday...

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 07/18/07 6:56
Chapter: With kisses for her and for him and for her...

OMG!!! I feel so sorry for Siriue and that was a brilliant end to this chapter!
I can't wait to see what Sirius reaction will be!!
Great chapter!!
Cont soon!!

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