err that malfoy is just the biggest arse!poor Sirius he would do anything for Hermione and his baby, I dont know how things could get worse for those two. update in a hurry I almost exploded when i say the update i cant wait
ahh i hate lucius malfoy! but i love your story!
Oooo that puts a twist on things! A really well written chapter, the manipulative Lucius is totally in character!
just a couple words:
seriously though, I enjoy reading your writing and am glad you've found writing as a hobby
ohhhhhh!!!!!!! he is EVIL!!!!!
ohhhhhh!!!!!!! he is EVIL!!!!!
Noooooo!!!!!! I'm REALLY happy that you updated....but....WHY!!!!!! Sirius making a deal with Malfoy? Awww....I'm sad....on the other hand,at least you made it REALLY believeable,AWESOME job!!! Please update again soon,I can't wait to see how this will play out!!!! Great story, *~*Sarah*~*
Once again... I bow down to you (nose touches the floor). Amazing read that keeps you guessing! THANK YOU!
I'm sure we all know that Sirius will do whatever he can to keep Hermione and his child out of Azkaban
I can't help but think that Malfoy can't be trusted! Right now I am feeling very worried for Hermione and her baby!!
Keep updating quickly if you can! It makes my day when my favorite stories are updated!
Oooh, it's getting very interesting....
Oh crikey!!! Malfoy's a evil b**tard. (But we knew that all ready) I think this is brilliant. Update soon, please?
(Smells like Sirius Black was great too)
Oh, and I like the Clarence Beeks connection. Trading Places is a classic. :)
Oooh! I can't wait until the next chapter is out! That was a very interesting plot twist, with Malfoy and Sirius. I think we all knew that the Ministry was going to find out about the baby sometime or other, and that something bad was going to happen when they did. I don't want to think about what decision Sirius is going to make. I think he'll try to tell the Order about Voldemort AND try to keep Hermione and the baby out of jail. That's what I think. I can't really decide what I HOPE will happen, because if what I THINK will happen happens, then something ELSE will happen, like Lucius finding out about Sirius telling the Order, and then doing something that gets Hermione put in Azkaban. Well, I will definitely wait impatiently for the next chapter. It might be the longest wait ever. (but probably not)
Author's Response: That was a long review! I love it. Thanks so much for reading!!
Oh i so HATE MALFOY!!!! I really like this story, even tho im a R/Hr shipper, but this is really unual and interesting....Hermione def has a taste for the older man....lol.....update soon!
omg. whats gonna happen now. poor sirius i bet its hard to go though with all of that.
Oh poor Sirius! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope there can be a happy ending!
OH MY GOD YOU ARE EVIL!!!! In a completely wonderful way.....I almost spit my coffee at the screen....
Well i have to say that this one doesnt exactly live up to the first part of the story.
Oh Very good! Poor Sirius! But Poor Hermione, I can speak from experience, that pregnancy is a very emotioal time and having to deal with a situation like this..... Oh WOW! Anyway you are doing a great job! Please update soon!
Interesting, but I liked the prequel better.
Author's Response: Yea... me too! Sorry, I'll try to get it going better, but this one's giving me trouble. Thanks for reading. =)