Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 07/05/07 16:10
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very, very good!!! “She locked them in a broom cupboard?!” Very smart, Harry. Could you imagine how scaring that would be to him? Excellent fic, though!!
-Susan

Author's Response: Yes, well, there's nothing more scary than the thought of your parents snogging in a broom cupboard. But I happen to know something way more scarier than that. Can't tell you though; you will just have to read my second chapter when it gets validated. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hermioneluvsronald
Date: 07/05/07 13:03
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

This is good! Can't wait for chapter 2!

Author's Response: I'm glad of it. Thank you for the great-albeit short-review!

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 07/05/07 7:44
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

Rofl, oh I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've submitted the next chapter already. I hope it will get validated!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 07/05/07 6:43
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

This story looks incredibly promising; it's funny without being annoying and completely AU (i.e. Voldemort dances around in pink robes). I like the addition of Natalie too, and it's lovely to have a pretty girl that isn't in love with Sirius. Your writing style is good; humurous, but believable, and few mistakes that I can see. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: You really like my story? Thanks! Natalie is a character that I had created a long time ago, and I decided to put her in my story as James' cousin. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 07/05/07 6:42
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

This story looks incredibly promising; it's funny without being annoying and completely AU (i.e. Voldemort dances around in pink robes). I like the addition of Natalie too, and it's lovely to have a pretty girl that isn't in love with Sirius. Your writing style is good; humurous, but believable, and few mistakes that I can see. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: yanagi_yuna
Date: 07/05/07 3:07
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

it's a great story (no, this is not a beginning of a criticism, i never criticize on comments.. *smiles*) but like you said, it is not funny YET but i expect something greater for the second chapter!

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry, I expect the second chapter will be funnier than the first one. I hope. Anyways, thanks a lot for the review!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 07/05/07 0:59
Chapter: Chapter One-A Trip Down Memory Lane

haha, nice. is this your first stort? Its a good begging. then again I'm a 13 (14 in march) but i have writtin lots of stories, I write just not at this site. lol. but this is good. ill give it A 7/10 (coming from me thats alot) I like it.

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Sweetbbe. Aka Savannah 50 & 60 fan (i know im a nerd) Whitney.

Author's Response: This is my first story in Mugglenet Fanfiction. I used to have another one, but they deleted it *pouts* so I submitted this Humor fic and it got validated! Thanks for the review!

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