Reviewer: lil_pumpkin
Date: 11/12/07 12:16
Chapter: Honest Trifles

Looking foreward to following this story. Never really cared for Snape... until DH and what we learned in the pensieve. I loved the dialogue with the sorting hat, and with Lucius as well. You depict Snape as being torn, angry, wanting to belong, and Lucius is explaining life as he's already lived it... Snape knows nothing of true kindness, so it is so easy for him to believe Lucius and fall in line with those who will accept him... I'm grieving for young Snape already. I'll keep reading...

Reviewer: SortingHat47
Date: 08/05/07 15:59
Chapter: Extend His Passion

Intelligent, intriguing, and spell-binding!!! Please continue with this soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it. I've got a draft of chapter three, but my clever & perceptive beta has told me to cut some adverbs, so it may be a bit before I'm able to post it. But thanks for the encouragement! ~Ken

Reviewer: Renabena
Date: 07/19/07 21:26
Chapter: Extend His Passion

that was really good! please continue!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Serena. I've got a draft of Chapter Three, which I've handed over to my beta. But I don't think I'll post it until the Deathly Hallows furor dies down, which means a week or two at the very least... ~Ken

Reviewer: Vampire Hunter Blade
Date: 07/03/07 15:06
Chapter: Prologue: Sound So Fair

Good job! Update soon please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try. ~Ken

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