Reviews For Love-Hate Rants
Reviewer: dracosgirl81193
Date: 07/14/07 18:05
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

On the A/N, I feel your pain. I really liked this poem. It made me laugh a little, but it also made me feel kind of bad for Lily. However, as we know, Harry is eventually born, so they get over their hatred. Jolly good show mate. Great job.

Reviewer: dracosgirl81193
Date: 07/14/07 18:04
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

On the A/N, I feel your pain. I really liked this poem. It made me laugh a little, but it also made me feel kind of bad for Lily. However, as we know, Harry is eventually born, so they get over their hatred. Jolly good show mate. Great job.

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 07/09/07 23:27
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

The first part made me laugh, but it went from hate to love kind of quickly.

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 07/09/07 23:26
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

The first part made me laugh, but it went from hate to love kind of quickly.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 06/30/07 9:41
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

A good job but something tells me you could have done better.=Sammy

Author's Response: Really?:O I thought I did my very best! Oh well, everyone is a critic. Thank you for leaving a review anyway. ;)

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 06/29/07 12:23
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

This is a very well written poem. It has a steady beat and rhythym (meaning nothing seems out of place), and a strong rhyme. I love the way it tells of Lily's feelings - it's canon, believable, and amazingly well done.

My favorite part would have to be this:

The air around you should be noxious.

*giggles* It just seems perfectly Lily-esque. I hate it when authors portray Lily wrongly, but you've done it perfectly here.

My only nitpick would be at the ending. It was a bit sudden what happened, and the lack of rhyme sort of shook it up from the poem. But otherwise, this poem was very well written, believable, and amazingly done. Great job!

Kate

Author's Response: Thank you Kate! The inspiration for this poem, and why it sounded like Lily was so pissed off with James, was based on some really immature idiots at my school. A couple of months ago, some boys really insulted me to the point that I wanted to kill them. Well, I couldn't do that, but I was still fuming. Writing this poem really helped in dealing with my anger. I am so glad you liked this poem.

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 06/29/07 4:21
Chapter: Love-Hate Rants

um, a bit sudden at the end there but very good

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the first review. I actually wanted it to be sudden at the end because that is what love is, a sudden, unpredictable event.

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