Wow you captured the twins briliantly and i saw them as the men they are and not the teenagers they seem to be
very clever little story
Also you got the of whole redhead family down wonderfully
well done :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for reviewing =) whew, I was afraid I didn't get the twins right, I find them incredibly hard to write.
very funny. i like...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it!
Very nice story. I love WWW stories anyway and Fred and George are very much as they should be in this story.
Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: No problem =) thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked it.
I know it isn't suppose to be hilarious, but I was already in a good mood and found really funny. Especially that they would use their products, and make all the D.E faint and day dream.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Teehee, I know, I was writing it and thought that their products could be used as weapons, too.
ha! very amusing i really like it. thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it =)