I really like it and the meaning is so true!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
You have a certain charm in this poem. I'm trying to figure out why I like it so much and I can't but I do. Also you have used an idea I myself am playing with at the moment.=Sammy
P.s.Didn't mean any offence so sorry if you took any.
Author's Response: Oh, no, I didn't take any offence. Thanks so much for the review!