Reviews For For Death, We Part
Reviewer: guiding ray of sunlight
Date: 10/11/07 11:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooh! Fresca, this is amazing. One of my favorite poems on here. The imagery is outstanding, as is the grief. Great job!

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 09/13/07 21:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

This poem flows very well! It is well written and you entered upon the challenge of this style of poem with vigur! :)

Chris

Reviewer: nikkiolapotter
Date: 08/23/07 22:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oooh!! That was really good. I loved the concept of it, and your wording. Ooh, and this:

She was his love, his northern star
Now she was gone, away, afar.


Great job, and thanks for the gorgeous banner!

Reviewer: LoopyLoonyLuna
Date: 08/22/07 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really good....luv it!!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 08/21/07 12:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was really really good. You did really well with the flow. Great job.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 06/30/07 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is so sad! Nice job on the rhyme and rhythm. I also really liked the image of Ginny as Harry's northern star. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

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