Ooh! Fresca, this is amazing. One of my favorite poems on here. The imagery is outstanding, as is the grief. Great job!
This poem flows very well! It is well written and you entered upon the challenge of this style of poem with vigur! :)
Oooh!! That was really good. I loved the concept of it, and your wording. Ooh, and this:
She was his love, his northern star
Now she was gone, away, afar.
Great job, and thanks for the gorgeous banner!
This is really good....luv it!!
This was really really good. You did really well with the flow. Great job.
That is so sad! Nice job on the rhyme and rhythm. I also really liked the image of Ginny as Harry's northern star. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)